It’s my novel, how do you think I’ll rate it?Yet I think my work is very good and I would be very happy people could know about it and enjoy it.
I think you should improve your writing, some of your chapter is not that good, and please clarify your story cause sometimes you cant feel the yaoi vibe in their, but over all its okay.I think your good even though english is not your first langauge.Continue writing stories.
This novel brings shame to The First Order that it is copying.Just like how two other novels from trial reads bring shame to the original World's Best Martial Artist that they're copying poorly.Don't read these copy cat trash novels. Read the originals, they're really one of the better quality novels on this site.
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Hi potential readers,The strength of this novel quality:- Unique story- Variety of weapons- MC starts from the bottom and train/battle a lot- Multiple females from different race: Demon, Human, even Succubus- Very funny conversation if you are Asian/Chinese descendant- Many Myth will appear inside the novel- This novel is made like a manga, fits better for who often imagine the scene- Very unique world background systemFeel free to try it and leave comments.Thanks Mina-san
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The author has done a really nice job presenting a world that contains game elements, slice of life, romance, and builds their world well. The plot is fun and cute and well worth the read
Besides a few easy To make tYpe errors the stoRy is very immeRsive. The game seems like it could actually exist which is nice. The only knock i have is that the side characTers arent developed enough early on
Was looking forward to the story of Eckrit... A former champion who rebelled but his system, personality and story is boring... If the story had half the quality of I.M.I.T.A. I would stomach it because they are connected... The novel would have been better if it started when he was a fallen champion... What motived him to rebel against the primordials... Was interested in his USURP adventures a bit before he met Osmort... And how he changed after that... Early development could have been skipped and it wouldn't have affected the novel...Plus not every protagnist has to have a sad backstory... Maybe his parents could have died of old age because of lack of talent to progress further and increase their lifespan... Since it is important to the overall multiverse, if I was the author I would rewrite it to make it better...
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One of the best books I have ever read. When I first starting reading this book I thought the main character would have a generic background onto how he go into where he is. Also this story balances the character as in he does not always win battle and has to struggle to continue onwards. Keep up the great work.
Not gonna lie. I was really excited in the beginning. I thought MC is not going to be some kind of pushover but his own man. He couldn't care less about king and the royalty, and to be honest i liked it and I hoped it would stay that way. But boy was I wrong. The selfish "hero" turned out to be typical cliche virgin that shits his pants whenever girl touches him.But let's leave that aside. The first thing that surprised me was the absolute idiocy of the MC and side characters."Oh you have just found a legendary fox that is known in legends as a beast that burns everything to the ground with its hellish flames?LET'S TALK ABOUT PUBLICLY SO EVERYONE KNOWS.""Oh you have formed a party with some douchebags that you don't trust aparat from the Hunter and Samurai-sensei? Let's tell them that you own a legendary beast. Especially when two of the members are dodgy AF at that point.""Oh you want to go to another kingdom (that would gladly go to war with yours) to loot an ancient Tomb that belong to a noble family? Oh go ahead but change your face because you're too famous. Oh, oh and don't bother with changing your name because it's really hard to connect the dots between a rising star of a hero and a random overpowered 20lvl character of the same name, especially when you tell your enemies that your name is real.Also don't forget the overpowered item that makes you invisible but don't use it to escape from the tomb. Threaten the noble families instead so it can result in your girlfriend death. But hey you just got yourself another girlfriend!"Then the worst happend. The harem. My god is it crap. Everyone falls for MC after 15 minutes of knowing him. Then MC is FORCED to double marriage, and 2 other girls want to sleep with/marry him. He turnes into a complete virgin-pushover. I was reading through it hoping that those girls would die out at some point so the author can actually start writing a good story, but as of 200+ chapter it's only getting worse. The interactions between the MC and his wives/concubines are really dry and annoying. They are actally worse than fillers in Bleach anime.And the sad part is, those interactions are getting more and more common. Those 'lovely' wives have a almost non-existant personality.Actually decent characters like the Hunter and Samurai are barely talked about later on. The main focus is on the harem.Most human opponents MC meets are just typical, cliche, prideful young masters that get whooped in three sentences.By the way, don't get it twisted. I don't mean that the MC should be ruthless and merciless psycho. I just wish he had some interesting personality, backbone or something. Anything honestly.Because of that i decided to drop it at around chapter 230ish. My english might not be the best as it's not my first language so my apologies if reading this hurt your brain in anyway ♥.Sorry for the rant but this story just annoyed me.Waste of coins/free passes. Do not recommend.