Ngl. Adding romance spoils the novel but as a fellow web novel reader I will read until I drop it like so many others.
Very intresting story, with slow and very Well made tribe development. The fact that you can read how happy and passionate the tribsmen are after every small quality of live update from Edward puts the smile on my face.
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This book is really well written. The start is unique and what I love is that. The MC has to fight for his things. It's not like his first cheat is the best in the universe.There are some grammar mistakes but nothing proofreading can't fix.Although the capitalization of letters can be a bit annoyingGreat story keep it up.
just dont drop this bro....................................................................................................................thats all
As a dedicated fan of your works, I just have to leave a review, no matter how simple and short. Great plot, dynamic characters. Can't wait to see how Mian will go about using his new powers.
A nice story. I have read up to chapter 4, and I like it. Writing is good, not complicated words, simple, and the general plot looks good. Please continue updating the chapter.
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Based on the story so far it seams like it will be great, the Mc has reasonable dislike of organisations and so far hasn't just immediately grown overpowered because of the system he got and while he has to start with very little it's not like he started with absolutely nothing like some of the stories I've read
Good work author I really like villain stories and this didn't disappoint very nice work I recommend it and author keep up the good work ? well done
I really like how you have build your story world and how you are progressing is. The fast updates are a great bonus. I am really enjoying it at the moment.
A very good story with interesting twists and not completely predictable story. Also, mc is quite intelligent and not some stupid 'hero' type character. Please don't make mc into an idiot in the future, make him pragmatic/ruthless when necessary.