The story is basically this: Me and all of my servants will abuse you untill you spit blood and you won't try to get revenge even though we borderline tourted you.That's it, a MEGA DISAPPOINTMENT!!!!
read three chapters and all three were awful. I already know i can't handle the MC and it's unlikely he's going to change much especially considering how the prologue introduced from his point of view, the story. the FMC is fine and would probably be better if it was from her perspective. going to read a few more but so far everything that's been written that I have read is just what seems to be 2/3rds random thoughts of his and then the other 1/3 him being a failure/trying to be a side character. maybe it's just preference that I always hate novels that decide to have a MC have side character syndrome.
This is so short yet enticing. I'm obsessed with the author's writing skills, born to be a writer and the story development is out of this world. It deserves the world's best review. Amazing job author.
Does anyone have the raw? They haven’t published a new chapter in days. Not sure if they are taking a break or something.
I love it! The plot is quick paced and full of tw6and turns. And just when you think you have it, a shock comes out of nowhere. All I am going to say to peak your interest is that the MC does in the first chapter.
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THIS IS AMAZING ???? . what a growth of characters ??. it was an page turning novel ( what a plot ❤❤❤) . loved it. more updates.. will there be a love traingle btw lucifer, alex and davina?? ? who will be the second mate ?? ... i am so excited. we need upstree. ??? ..i strongly recommend it.
I think the author should invest time to improve Itachi's character. I mean, like Itachi is cool in the sense that his a character in the naruto series with a major sad story but can endure, wait no, can sacrifice everything just to protect his brother even if it means his own happiness. I admire him for his traits that makes him so great (this is just my opinion) but then I still congratulate author for writhing an amazing story. It's not the best but this story is still one of the best. You don't read an awesome Itachi reincarnate fanfic everyday. ??✨???
I really liked the novel Description I thought that it sounds interesting and I like I will be ?????????????????????????????????????????????????
The first thing I notice when reading this Novel, is that the first few chapters of the story introduce a lot of characters at once, which was a little overwhelming at the moment, but slowly you start to get who is who from the abundance of dialogue. The characters do need some development with descriptions, but other than that, fun to imagine what they look like! Same goes for the background of the scenario, more describing but has a general idea on where the story is taking place. The grammar in this story and the overall structure needs some work, but the Author does have a compelling hook that draws the reader into a festive atmosphere. It looks like the Author has a reasonable amount of dialogue between the characters. Dialogue is important to a story and this book has it down!I encourage the Author to practice editing the chapters before releasing them to lessen grammatical errors and possibly filling the chapters a bit more with description. Other than that, I wish them luck with future chaps and votes!