Book one was fantastic! I can’t wait to see how our gifted main character and his beloved companions develop and conquer this new realm. Every character deserves attention and I love how much care the author takes in their personal development even though they might not be the main character.
don't read this even if the story is good the translator is only copy pasting ML stuff after chap 40.the chapters are not being translated at all and we are being charged an average of 13 coins per chap
what do you people know?keep complaint do you know when the author of this book was 9 years old his one leg was running a business and the other leg was climbing hills to go to school.you people are dumb.compared to the author's achievement the mc is nothing. 8 years old and opened a stall,cook food,earn money absolutely nothing in Chinese standard he is at best average
I like it.
It has close to no grammatical errors except for a few spelling mistakes. It's a nice take on the quirkless world of mha but nothing new. Though it does have the potential to be a great fanfic. Just try not make the MC too overpowered too early. The pace at which you're going is just right. Great work and please don't drop the fanfic.
Oh, love the story. The plot is interesting and the author is experienced so there are absolutely no problems in grammar.The story flows amazingly well!It also has a really fun premise and characters so far.I have high hopes for this one.Just increase the upload rate author!!
Website : qidian chinaRating : 8.7(195)Chapters : 598Status : ongoingRank : ?Word count : 1.27millionauthor level : platinumNo of works : 4Started : 2019-4-15Chinese title : 第一序列Where's status guy?
The story line is good but the way they talk nd how its rushed when they talk is kinda annoying tho
this is beautiful. I love it
Okay, I need to talk about this opening scene because holy shit. A vase gets broken and suddenly the entire power structure of this competition is laid bare. Gu Nanci is supposed to be the disposable one, the flower vase, the guy they brought in just to fill numbers — and yet the moment five points get deducted from her, Qin Bei literally freezes. Because Wen Jiuyi is the company's golden child, and if his debut position shifts even slightly, the whole carefully laid plan collapses. That single broken object became a detonator for every hidden tension in the room. The plot structure here is really clever because it operates on two levels. On the surface, it's a competition show incident. But underneath, it's exposing how the entire system is rigged — who matters, who doesn't, and what happens when the scripted outcome starts to wobble. And then Cheng Yang stands up and voluntarily takes the deduction too. Not because he's some naive nice guy, but because he's calculating. He needs Gu Nanci on his team, and buying loyalty early is cheaper than dealing with rebellion later. What really got me was how the narrative pivots from chaos to control in one beat. Xi Ruqian, that old fox, turns a potential disaster into a praise-worthy moment of team unity. He reframes the entire incident so fast it's dizzying. The company doesn't punish the key players — they reward them. The system protects its own, no matter what. And then the battle round announcement hits like a gut punch. Si Chang's face when he hears about live battles — you can literally see him plotting. He's already imagining Gu Nanci's humiliation on stage. The plot isn't just moving forward, it's setting traps. Every rule Qin Bei explains is also a weapon being handed to the antagonists. But here's what keeps me up at night: Gu Nanci drew number three and acted thrilled while secretly breathing a sigh of relief. She manipulated the person who was supposed to be manipulating her. Who's really playing who in this room?
Horrible story line she weak and you have one person stick around and she being mistreated and manipulated
It was a fantastic ride. Well written. Characters are well fleshed-out. The story is cohesive. The plot is well thought of. I hate it when a story starts one way and “takes a life of its own” … but not with this one. You will fall in love with the characters.