brokensouls
excellent novel good world background excellent plot nice powering ups good twists and little fascinating mysteries. all in all i strongly recommend
It was a good write ...Good quality chapters And good character development.........................................BUT DROPPED I GUESS
The story idea is just awesome, I was in love with it the moment I read the synopsis. I hope the author continues the story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
After finishing the trial read(Gotta go fast), I can say the novel is going fairly good. I can't say it's fantastic; nor can I say it's bad. So far, the novel is centered around the development of the MC's fortress, and the troubles he goes through in building it up. Within the fortress, MC is invincible. The issue is, if he leaves the fortress, he is very weak at the moment. Outside the fortress he will have no power. Only his subordinates will have power, but once they leave he has no control. Characters are alright, they have their own personalities. Some of them do overlap, but I can see development for them that couldn't be done in 60 chapters, which is a difficulty trial reads have.From what I can tell the novel will be fraught with misunderstandings about the influence the MC has outside his fortress's influence. It might get repetitive, but all in all it is an entertaining concept and I enjoyed reading the first 60 chapters. I can see the novel being successful. The writing is stable around the intended concept.I do wish, however, that the author went more in detail on the cultivation systems; at least gave us a glimpse at the skills used and what the MC's body is up to. 60 chapters in and I forgot the MC has a real body.P.S. The cliffhanger on chapter 60 makes me want to go jump off the cliff and read the MTL.
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Hi guys. It's me the author but in a different username. Why you ask? I may have accidentally deleted all the data as I accidentally reset my phone so I am sorry to tell you all that the book is gone. I cannot finish it and to be honet , I lack the motivation to start it all over again I deeply apologize to everyone.
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This book so far is all about the character's complexity and growth.First, there's really no overpowered cheat system so far. He goes back in time but ultimately he doesn't even choose a class he is all that familiar with. Sure he has some skills and game knowledge from his previous life, but not really too much in-depth usage of this experience like finding epic treasures or performing speed runs based on this knowledge.So for now, the real appeal of this story centers around the contrast of this character. Sure he is kind of a mischievous, perverted fellow at heart but he also is a trainee priest with some kind of deep reason for doing this - it's definitely a first for me to see this. Also he appeared to be a loner in his last life but now he surprisingly has some friends and even somewhat stumbled on repairing a broken relationship with this neighbor.Either way, there's humor, heart, and potentially some intelligent gameplay in this story. And hey, who doesn't love a bold yet thoughtful fatty as an MC.
I'm still only in the early stages of reading through this novel, however I can definitely say this has been good read thus far with an interesting plot and some great translations.
"no way bro, you can see the boss drops"'yeah man I can see them that one is the sword of time, that one is the chest piece of rangiku, and that one is someone's bathwat- uhh no its actually my drink for tonight'"how bro, when ever I kill them i just get a bunch of air.... This is soo unfair how dare the heavens forsake me like this"
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