Such a great story, Had a big round of applause for you but i think you should have to do more work on creativity, I have some ideas for you
I enjoyed reading this novel as the writer's proficiency in the language is very good. For some of the novels I have read, it confused me as the use of pronouns is wrong
Hey guys, it's the author here with a shameless review. Anyway, a brief warning. The early chapters are a slow burn to lay a solid foundation for the story, characters and other things. You'll understand why before you hit chapter 10. This is a long term project of mine that will be around for a long time to come. I hope you enjoy the story, and I can't wait to interact with you all.Thanks for taking the time to read this novel of mine.Stay safe.
This novel will hopefully be a great success. From your last novel i gave this one a chance. So far this has been a good ride hopefully you Keep up the great work.
is decent and has potential but it hasnt been updated in forever.............................................................................
I’m here again, hoping that we can have a chance to work together and we are willing to pay you for distributing your work.The conditions should be generous. If you are interested, please contact me via this email:adaren06*@*gmail.com(delete *）, then I should take this opportunity to discuss it with you in details.
You have a great start and draft in your novel! I can see the potential it has. One thing though, you should probably re-read a few of your chapters as I am noticing a few grammatical errors. Hope to see you continuing to write in the future!
I like the development of the story I wish you the best bro i hope you can keep continuing to write this great story
I'm sinking in... you did well.???Great start and the ability to create mental imagery is powerful in your work.keep it up, I'll be following you up.
It's a nice story with consistent updates.. Keep it up author.. . Your writing skills are really nice.. . Good.. . Good.. . Good.. Good.. . Good
Please, if someone is selling guns, sell them to this author so he can put himself out of his misery, i mean why ****q do you even write with this standard of english? How old are you, dont you have anything better to do than torture people with you lack of imagination, your overflowing **** hormons are screaming lust in every single chapter, go jerk of or something seriously. I seriously wanted to give this book a chance because i try my best to be partial and rational and can even ignore poor english if story is good, but this doesnt even deserve 1/5, its just a plain 0000, go learn english and perhaps finish grade school before you start writting again?
I love this story. There is only 1 thing I don't like about it but you did put a warning on every chpt and yet I still read it. I wish & hope that you will start this story back up and continue it. I would totally put 5 stars if it were not the fact that "stability of updating" was part of the ratings.