Tale of Asha

Very good, like the twist

a story about a man going back 10 year's in the past just before the doomsday started OR a story about a man going back AND collecting all the famous and beautiful girls from the past and making them say 'LORD' to him!! I was so cringed at that, that i nearly closed the the app right there ??? the story might have beed interesting if i haven't already read tons of other similar books, so it's not really  good in my opinion. and other thing to note is that yhe cheat is too OP at the start, i mean two taboo ( highest rank) class and a ring right off the bat on first chapter, i think going back in the past is already op but author doesn't even know what being humble means? overall i really like op main characters but i do prefer a certain buildup before the caracter is really powerful.

Let me preface this by saying that this in my opinion above the level of junkfood, but not at sushi level and definitely not at wagyu beef level (for now). I really don't think that this is special in some way as it is the tried and true time travel and video game story. I find the MC to be pretty enjoyable as he hasn't been a complete ass hole from the start even though he seeks revenge in a certain sense. He thinks with long term benefits and he isn't ridiculously OP from the start. Characters are very lackluster though. The side character roommates rarely show up and they are typical to say the least. NPC characters which I would hope have more personality seem more like NPCs which isn't bad, but it kinda sucks. I think my biggest problem is this question: Why not make the genre a wuxia or xianxia mix instead of making it a video game one? To me, it seems as if replacing the scenes with IRL with more in game stuff would be just fine as IRL doesn't seem to matter much anyways.

Side quest #1 - pizza (done now)Side quest #2 - doneSide quest #3 - doneSide quest #4 - doneJust waiting for chapters right now. Also, daily quest system seemed kinda new. I like that. Continue to give us interesting quests!

hello, i haven't started reading yet so here's some puns :-I had a crazy dream last night! I was swimming in an ocean of orange soda. Turns out it was just a Fanta sea.-A crazy wife says to her husband that moose are falling from the sky. The husband says, it’s reindeer.-Ladies, if he can’t appreciate your fruitjokes, you need to let that mango.-Geology rocks but Geography is where it’s at!-Did you hear about the restaurant on the moon? I heard the food was good but it had no atmosphere.-Can February March? No, but April May.-Need an ark to save two of every animal? I noah guy.-I don’t trust stairs because they’re always up to something.

I like the development of the story I wish you the best bro i hope you can keep continuing to write this great story