I love it~ keep going! the villainess is soooo cute!!! ???
It's a bit early to tell the direction of the story. I'll cover the things so far. Writing quality is decent and has improved from the 1st chp. It's easy enough to read. No off putting errors or anything. But it can definitely be better and made more engrossing. As for the story, I wouldn't say there are no clichés but things are resolved quickly and it doesn't drag down the story. Like I said before, it is still early but there's lots of potential to make an interesting story. This is something I hope the author focuses on. Developing important characters not just the MC. I also feel that mc jumped the gun too quickly in the killing the entire family, he doesn't have a strong reason to kill the innocents as well or even torture the family head. His father's situation wasn't right, but the mc's retaliation was too much too quickly. Not enough development for that sort of thing. Objectively the family considered his father easily replaceable, only a few were directly responsible for their suffering. Author could still fix that playing on MC being inexperienced and hot-headed back then because frankly since the mc isn't insane there isn't enough development to make him so cold and ruthless from the get go. World background is slowly being built, I hope it's done intricately and interestingly.
At first i dropped this book twice but after that it started get affect me and i couldn't stop, You could hate some certain FL's but they become cuter later on, But it was a waste that they couldn't get enough time there is a serious harem potential here but its lacking apart from that mc was very stupid at first but he becomes better later on story and he was similar to certain mc that i couldn't remember his name but better version of it and i didn't mind grammar too much since i'm a person that not too great with grammars myself and My biggest complaint is chapters comes too slow ):
It isn't that good to read, kinda boring.Read 'I level up by being Idle'Sounds like a typical copy paste, but trust me it is the best one of this batch.
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This is such a great book witha an amazing plot , the blurb of the story says it all , you write so well and top of all this is an outstanding book . I like the spirits of both of your leading characters .keep it up and would sure recommend this book ❤❤❤..
This novel is much better than the last few mmo novel. Story is interesting but idk if it will be selected. Last few novels chosen from trial read has been trash. I don’t know how those trash with horrible ratings got selected. Qidian should actually read our reviews, but they don’t.
A quote from this novel "Sometimes, listening to someone's problem is the best way to help them." that quote made me learn something new! it's indeed a slice of life genre. I F-ing love it!
Incredibly great concept of idea ? love it ♥️
A good read actually. But the descriptive department seems to be lacking. What I mean is that you really express yourselves and. I do feel the emotions of the characters. But the world background is what you need to describe the best. Anyways, continue working hard. Grammatical errors are also seen however just a bot of proofreading and you're done! Also, try increasing your vocab! Goodluck
Bro did you ever imagine if hulk thinks that by fighting in hilk form is too easy and so he starts fighting as Bruce banner.Your novel seems same bro you make mc op but when fighting he didn't even come in middle of the chart. He don't use his powers and don't use his weapons fights with hands and you say that there is no need an Excalibur for gobli. But you still use hands when fighting high level monsters and say that they can one hit ko mc.Are you really kidding me bbro...,............
The character design is fantastic, I like how it goes back a few hundred years every so often. The world background is just phenomenal. All in all I'm excited to see where this book goes.