DaoistStorm22

A beautiful story with a lot of twists and turns. Good turn out

This was a whirlwind of a story, but a great read!

absolutely terrible english.
Really jarring to read and not fluent at all.
Alot of terrible spelling too "goodnessdness!"

Great book. I enjoyed reading it.

Great book so far, can't wait for more!

Yhhiiiiiuu

finnally update

awesome so far!!

This book was very well written and I enjoyed it ! It was heartbreaking ... but I guess not all stories are meant to be all happy

What an amazing story, I enjoyed every bit of it, weldon author and thanks too for the bonus story, I'm really enjoying it and I look forward to more updates from you

awesome & funny...such a grate book......

it's a wonderful book