I Want to Break Free from the Vampire’s Blood Bag

Interesting premise and start, but becomes unreadable past chapter 60 (MTL-level). Also, a very lackluster romance and a great deal of "coincidences" (plotarmor) made the story far less enjoyable as it continued.

nice story everything as of now is good really enjoying just hope author doesnt abondon the story in between                                                   

Found another hidden gem ! This novel deserve my spirit stones ! Oh i'm so happy with myself ^^140 characters my ass 140 characters my ass 140 characters my ass 140 characters my ass 140 characters my ass 140 characters my ass 140 characters my ass 140 characters my ass 140 characters my ass

At first i dropped this book twice but after that it started get affect me and i couldn't stop, You could hate some certain FL's but they become cuter later on, But it was a waste that they couldn't get enough time there is a serious harem potential here but its lacking apart from that mc was very stupid at first but he becomes better later on story and he was similar to certain mc that i couldn't remember his name but better version of it and i didn't mind grammar too much since i'm a person that not too great with grammars myself and My biggest complaint is chapters comes too slow ):

I will start of by saying, you're doing great writing a story and it's not an easy job. You have succeeded in doing it. Congratulations !!The quality of wiritng is good and had good scope to become an even better writer in the future.The story development in each chapter is slow but very informative and very needed to get the insight of the story, hence I loved it !! Causing impatience means readers are eager to know more about this story.The character designing is coming up well, interestingly and sort of makes a reader keep reading further to know more, but getting to the point was a bit dragged that in between some paragraphs I found myself skimming through to know what it is. But worth it, the mysterious feeling which makes me wanna know more unable to stop, it already a success .Updating I have to say a but slow since it's only updated twice in a week, I wonder if people would see the novel and reme to read it if it lies unnoticed. Maybe that could be improved.The world background. Am applauding.  It's perfect and simply marvellous. You have a wonderful insight about things you are wiritng and it gets to the reader well. With the descriptions I could see everything in my head as i read. Congratulations, you're a writer with a future. Keep going and try updating regularly.  Fighting !

Malachim is an interesting novel.First, I would advise giving it a chance until chapter 4, the novel really starts there. It's an interesting premise and well-executed, Malachims, possessions, the church, it's all kind of simple to understand, while all those things clearly have more depth to them.One thing I had a hard time with is remembering Alley wasn't a girl LOL. I'll get used to the name... eventually!So far the novel has been set up properly, and we encountered interesting characters, and there's some foreshadowing for things to come, so it should be interesting to red.The pace feels slow at times, but the faster-paced scenes make up for it.I recommend :)