Thank you for this wonderful story, I really love this story it's captivating and I love the thrilling and suspense in it as well as the adventure I can't wait to the next update.
Albinus tightened his grip, looked into the lady's eyes and said "this time, she can't stop me". Saying those words, he ruthlessly killed the woman in his hand.
Henricus: *letting out a maniacal laughter* Oh Rad, always the bright star ain't ya? Best friend you say? Brother you say? please, don't make me laugh. You have always been an obstacle to me. That woman beside you , should have been mine! The power you wield, should have been mine! Everything you ever accomplished should have been mine.
Honest opinion, this story is surprisingly very well made. This sort of topic of being the first cultivator is usually written badly but this has done an amazing job, along with world or universe development. The story is very interesting and isn't just stale, it usually chages topics every few chapters, such as doing cultivation for 2 chapters then maybe working on upgrading his forging or alchemy skills. If you are interested is cultivation stories I would full heartedly recommend this, it's also a great introduction to what cultivation is!
beautiful novel, I hope it won't be abandoned..................................................................................................................
I've read it for like 60 chapters and i have to say I love reading kingdom building novels and this one had a really good concept but there is no character development no system or golden finger explanation and no plot I don't know if it would have in later chapters but you have to make people interested in your novel, all in all, I am extremely disappointed. ?u200d??u200d?
I haven't read any thing. But i just want to say that Please make MC a little Evil then redeeming himself later on. I mean, i have never seen a self aware that realizes his wrongs and right and still stand by them.I hope that he resolves energy crises at least for himself.
I really like how this novel is going so far but I do wish there was a collection of similar novels to this
Looking forward to more. This seems like quite the beginning and I wonder where you are going with this. Sia and master sid are the main characters? Is he a janitor too? Why are the dates so different? If she traveled and hasn’t met Sid yet why does the synopsis say she learned from him? I hope the next couple chapters reveal the answers to those.
Yahhhh wahoo on fire??? yeah...a must read 4sure!! Vote vote vote gifts gifts gift lol!!!!! Pleease update the novel fast at least one chap a day???? okay❓❓⁉️❗⁉️❗here your reward ??? ???
Awesome Best Novel! Character Design and World Background is Amazing. MC is just perfect and satisfying to read. Interesting. R-18 content is Hot, detailed very good. Writing quality on high level goes very smoothly that I even felt touched with family drama. Love the Plot and looking for much more! Thanks!
More chapters please author I look forward to the story