Excellent stuff, thrilling experience at its max. Must read for reading who like thriller. Enjoyed a lot reading it, fantastic one. Recommended to all readers
It's really cool, you have a fertile imagination, I feel like I'm watching a movie in the cinema. I really like that you made Rocky remember his life. I feel warm when he talks about his mother and sister
I don't want to be a spoiler, overall, it is a good book, for people like me, who like to read, survival and building kingdom like genre, this book is a fit to read, also author writes story in details but when it reaches to climax, you will get really hype. You have to be patient to read, if you are then, you will like this book. The story line is amazing and author want to take reader to his world slowly so he writes his earlier chapters to support the story line. I really like to read it. If you like added this to library.
I love evolutionary creature reincarnation stories. I like that it is happening in the sea, it is still to this day one of the most mysterious and unexplored places. It is interesting and i look forward to future updates but so far it was great.
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The book is pretty good but it's hard to understand some paragraphs. Like the other say it need more world building and character development. I feel that the book is written without proof reading it.the author just put what's in his mind without connection to the previuse paragraph. Basically the story event happen without explaination. It needs to be proof read and change some words that the westerner to understand.
The story is well written and the MC is well developed. If you can get past the first 3 chapters, its smooth reading from there. R-18 chapters are there, but aren't shoved down your throat excessively. Probably wasting a power stone here seeing as it looks like the author has dropped it, but it'll stay in my library just in case.
I need this book translated asap. So fun and amusing omg. Pls ? ?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
This is one of the best original novels on this website. The story is great and is unique. The magic system of this novel is realistic and logical. I suggest everyone to give it a try if you're into Magical realism genre
Bro I have a suggestion for you, can you in this novel do like G one actually has a fighting spirit like yk the excitement to fight stronger opponents (it will make him grin maniacally) and fight with full power
chapter 33 the mc talks to the system but the reply is not there I only see mc side of conversation where is the systems side of the conversation I feel like I'm reading only half the chapter
Writing quality is pretty good and stable. Just need more strength in writing and a little correction on using Punctuation marks.Over all, work is potential. Use more spaces while writing. Keep fighting ❤️