JaneSmitten
I really hope you can pick up the pace of the book with more chapters being released. In general, the novel is very promising and I hope you can continue this amazing novel of yours. Thanks.
Ain't this already being translated???? And it's already nearing 300 chapters. Reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee..Read More
In support of Grandmist_Sage, i petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................
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Writing is pretty good, the updates seem to be coming out at a regular pace, the story seems to be developping at a good pace as well, I would recommend giving it a look.
PLEASE vote for this novel , It's like Custom Made Demon King. The protagonist have a cheat : Dimensional Codex that let him reincarnate/Teleport in random Worlds/Dimension: Movies, Novels.....
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It starts with the cliché of someone hurting him and he can't do anything... are you dirty? Can such a wound be considered an attempted murder, and the police or the government do nothing? says he barely has money when he could have sued both the other guy's master and the one who attacked him. and then the cliché of playing the game without knowing what to do that his sister gave him starts, I've read many with the same script (literally the same) congratulations for your creativity
I think this story is something that many would enjoy. Action packed with loads of information right off the bat. Me personally i prefer the show don't tell standard and having mystery and things revealed over time. I think if you don't and simply want a straight forward narrative this is definitely the story. To me the weakest part is the combat scenes sometimes the timing is slightly off, this is typically due to the wording sometimes being past tense then referring to actions that should have already happened ex. saying a character dashed forward with an attack, then in the next line saying he grabbed his sword and dashed forward, that time of thing. All in all I could see many people enjoying this novel, so keep it up author.
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Translation quality is very poor ruining what could be one of the top stories on QI. For the most part the translation is overly verbose which detracts from the story. MTL translations of the first chapter read better than the QI. Even the synopsis has glaring errors that have yet to be resolved: Moons wax and wane! While it may seem alright to use Moon wanes and grows it's ridiculous to partially use the correct terms in a sentence. Attempts to politely point out problems with the synopsis and initial chapters have been met with silence hence this post.
Fking translator alway fking ruined it, and webnovel fker doesn’t care.
