Dear lord let me out.
I really like what you got going on here, but the grammar is pretty bad. Regardless am enjoying this a lot, but please re-read your chapters at least 3 times before updating the story.
Also, you might wanna correct some/alot of grammatical mistakes on the last chapters, because for a lot of people the first chapters are always their first impressions of the book.
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The synopsis surely hooked me up.
As for the first chapter, it's one of the best ever.
It's very good. I like this story too. It's definitely amazing and wonderful.
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
Your quality of writing and story development are magnificent, congratulations. The world background was also well crafted and masterfully developed.
This novel is new but it sounds great.
Loved the book and cover.
The plot is super. The writing style is awesome. It is easy flowing.
Great work author. Carry on we want more!!!!
It's amazing one. The blurb is clear. Author, you describe the POV so well. I subscribe it and i love to continue this story. Please update more.
Everything is amazing. I could go on forever about some of the characters. The fearsome indulgence I get when I read this. The background of the world. The development of the story. But those things are all GOOD. It's in human nature to point out the bad as well. So- sorry but when will this person ever update again? Seriously. He didn't even leave a word. He doesn't have to but it would be nice. I love this story. Really I do! But he's gone and if he ain't back by the fifth month then so am I.
Well, i will say this story is a good one , honestly i thought this wi be boring, because the typical story with strong mc from start is good only at start but wil be bad later. For now let say that this story have a good start and if the author can hold this to the end, this will be a great novel
Needs to update more, other than that pretty dope. Hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuurrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrgggggggggggggggggggg............