Nima0S0
Hi! I should say the way you write is so smooth and decent, it gave me chills when I read how you describe the background of the world's. And the story build is really interesting. I got sucked in from when the will of world is introduced and when Reed goes in and you know what xD *spoiler* lol. This story is a gem for fantasy lovers and motivates other fantasy writers that are on here. Thank you for such a crafted story. And good luck for the future.
I love it it’s an amazing story and I want more more and more if you could like not drop the series that would be great
Next chapter please !!!
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Author here!
I like these reincarnation(ish) VRMMO novels as a sort of guilty pleasure, but the main ones are getting stale. Soooooooo, I decided just to casually write on myself.
This won't be some godly thing that brings some all new ideas to the table, but I'll try not to make it shtty.
Give it a shot! Maybe you'll like it :]
I love this novel like i really like it. The idea is sooooo good. The MC is always determined to be ahead of the population in terms of technology for example hes out here making rockets and these guys are struggling to make wooden bikes. Although the MC does change his decisions a lot for example he said he doesn’t want to help anyone but then he blows up a terroist group with bombs. I also think the MC will start up a channel as a source of income so he can experiment with different materials IRL. Either way i highly recommend you check out this hidden gem.
Nice starting to the story. A very new concept to write about. Interested to find out the journey of a ring. Do check some grammer mistakes and use apps like grammerly or proaidwriter for help if needed. Be more stable in the updates
Fantastic! This book is immersive, interesting, and intelligently planned. I think this is one of the best cultivation book around.
Too complicated to enjoy. and the plot heh?? is a joke. Even after 200 chapters there hasn't been any substantial movement of the plot.....
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A good and refreshing story about a Moron/Naive in a cultivation story The MC have only his detection of lie and with that he want to reach a greater strength and it's the difference between this and other cultivation story not scheming or false "good MC" .The MC in this story is naive and that will create some new opportunities and other difficulty that don't have other MC for example :If he want something he tell it ,unlike other cultivation story ,that don't revelate anything because of the sensibility of the information
