zzz sudden premium without noticealthough the story quite good but the response make it deserved only bad review------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
One of the better stories. Sad that they only have a small part of the whole thing here. Fighting the evil guild, warding off elves due to misunderstandings, dealing with the undead, creating enlightened slimes and slime people (girl), and more. There was a full-color version at one point, either a manga or webtoon. The title ISN'T the one listed on this version of the book however..
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Although I don't have many word to say I'll just say it's good from what I experience in reading this story ??????????????????????
Ok so I usually don't bother writing a review, but this one just annoyed me in the wrong way..First - synopsis only reflect the very first chapter, as from the second chapter it feels like it's a different book what so ever..Second - let's say we ignore synopsis and first chapter as a mistake, but even then the MC after transmigration can only think about having s**.. Third - following from second point there's no story development, there's a random time skip with unexplained cultivation increase (cultivation levels are a mystery) and forced events without any logic involved.I'm normally quite tolerant with the novels even if they're not my cup of tea, but even if it's the very first novel that the author wrote there's just too many inconsistencies. WebNovel SHOULDN'T allow the novels of such bad quality to reach trial reads..
This review is based up to chapter 60 of the novel.Initially I felt this was only mediocre in the beginning. Although it had an interesting setting, it was a little slow moving and I was even considering dropping it. But, alas, I had just dropped Boss Monster Chat (very disappointing!!!!!), so I decided to continue or I would have nothing to read! I'm actually glad I continued, because this starts to pick up once they enter the human world. I'm pretty interested in how it'll continue and hope that there will continue to be interesting developments in the real world. I love when they act as hidden experts and then reveal their powers to face slap everyone! Highly enjoyable.So far this is the best I've read from the new batch, so I hope it gets chosen!
This looks promising!I will read it and hope that it is indeed good.Hope you won't drop this and thanks for the effort!Bye!!! by LittleGluttonSlime
I want to be very clear I really enjoy reading the story I just think it could be better I'm not a writer so I don't know how it could be better or any suggestions on what you could do but keep up the great work.
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First is the obvious issue of grammar and pronoun usage. Often times you do not know if the character is male or female because the pronouns used are switched for the same character over and over again. For the most part I have been able to ignore that issue as there is a lot of content and for the most part I find the premise to be enjoyable.The story itself has one of the worst 'goldfingers' that I have come across. Basically the MC is just a machine used to transfer various works from one universe to his current one. He gets little to no benefit for doing so except to make money and fame. He gets points to unlock other mangas from Universe A so that he can make an exact copy of it in his current Universe. The only changes that he seems to be making is cut out filler chapters or to try to make the art a bit more up-to-date. I have read similar works such as 'I am a superstar' or others like it where the MC is plagiarizing from one universe into his current one but at least there is usually some concrete benefit built into the 'goldfinger' such as skills or attribute gains. If anything at least the MC should be given the increased creativity to make changes and update and personalize the work for his universe and situation. Just maybe give him a sight bonus so that he can see the prospective popularity or objective quality/rating of the piece once it is created. Don't just act as a copier for your system.
welp kinda sad liked the story. Was fun to read.For the Author I kinda hope u might pick it up sometime again :D And i can understand your reasoning with amazon. Woulda kinda only been nice if you could have told it beforehand with an announcement :D
I feel like this story could use a little much work fleshing out the background of the world. I have gathered some information, but I would expect it to be a little quicker in the storyline.