Writing quality: Top notch. Few if any errors that pull you out of the story. Story Development: Absolutely splendid read, you have a bullied kid, parental problems, PTSD/trauma, then coming across a "Opportunity" this leads to its own set of problems but incredible potential positives outcomes. To a solid bit of foreshadowing of something major occuring in the story early on and gradually picking up into a grand finale of sorts. Can't imagine what we will be getting to experience in this story few hundred chapters from now.Character Design: Solid work here across the board. Consistently expressing other characters and how the occurrences in the story in itself effected them. Showing growth in the main character early on and being consistent with it. Main character isn't broken op and still has enemies but clearly you can see what his growth rate will be like in the future. Updating stability: I want to see 14 chapters a week. I personally read extremely fast. So I'm generally picky here. And I like basically being able to get on every day and getting to read a solid 2 chapters from Novels I am really enjoying. Meh I'm needy/greedy when it comes to good literature can't help it. I just read most of the chapters in burst and caught up to the most recent chapter so I can't judge on this and so forth leaving it at 5 stars until further notice. World Background: Overall solid, the author gives good description of environments that the "present" story is taking place in from schools, training areas, bedrooms and more and has also included this in combat scenes in the use of weapons or defenses. The story has gone over some history but it's been here and there for me, this is probably not what most people will think, it's just what I personally would prefer a bit more in this one specific aspect. Can't help it I'm needy. More I have to read of this the better. Total: 5 out of 5 in each category until further notice. It's definitely caught my eye and I'm now paying attention to it's uploads. Very enjoyable read that makes me want more. To see what's coming next.Final Verdict will be given when the author reaches 1,000 chapters or the novel is otherwise abandoned.
Enjoyable read
Too good to see anything, but author just left us man....
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Automatic 5 stars for the title alone which tells me that this will be harem so basically five stars for the harem! ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)I haven't read a chapter yet but...Who cares! ( ͡°( ͡° ͜ʖ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)ʖ ͡°) ͡°)
A good start, with minimal grammar errors and good prose. This'll go far given enough time. Dialogue flows organically, but you might want to flesh it out a bit more. Describe the character's cadence or subtle mannerisms during dialogue to give it more impact and individuality. Other than that? I'll see what becomes of this after a few more chapters. Keep on writing ?
Sci-fi genre needs a lot of mental theories and on top of that, creativity. So, not everyone could pull off such a genre. Mixing magic with science is a unique concept that the author has used. Worth a try!??????????
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The author is wrong about the tag #overpowered, it is # weak to strong. The plot seems good in the beginning but many loopholes begin to appear, and mc seems smart but dumb at the same time, and too less interaction the system, like he isn't curious about the system at all.
First and foremost I most say I was recommended this novel by webnovel front page. When I’m making this review I have only read 23 chapters so take it with a grain of salt. As of right know maybe the rating is like 3.4/5 will probably change.Summery of the idea of the story: Rich kid get transferred to the past before the world ends and uses his inheritance to buy in game currency in a “magical game” that uploads your soul/mind in the body of an noble in a so far generic fantasy world. He pays to win. The author has a hade habit of naming things and not describing things like “snake fire canon” or “female daemon cannon” but like what are the supposed to mean or look like. Then he forgets to add canon later in the chapter so it’s “female daemon” and “snake fire” I’m I suppose to know what they are. The there are what he calls “shield breakers” like what are they. I googled and close thing is spear men with shield from darkest dugeon it’s like the author expects me to know things that he names with out describing them. That’s fine if it’s a fanfic but not a stand alone story.The story also feels eastern. This is not a bad thing and most novels feel eastern on webnovel. Characters feel a bit 2d but I’m not really a long way in to the story yet to know. The world so far is an generic fantasy world with flintlock tech. The original world called “blue planet” don't know why it’s not earth but whatever. Have not been explored more than he is rich and from an “hidden clan” and that it breaks to pieces and only hundred thousand that's in the beta test survives with the soul/mind uploaded to the body of a noble in the other world. They released a lot of chapter in a few days ether this in an translation or the story was already published som were else. So don’t know how updates will be after the release there entire stock.Rating 3/5 out of polished feathers. As said earlier have only read a bit more than 25 chapters so will probably do an update when I have read some more. And somebody let me know if you see this review of if it has been ghosted or taken down. Has happens before. Hope you all have wonderful day.
I noped out as I've seen a few too many LNs with bad editing. It honestly seems promising. With the corona virus epidemic, depression has been at an all time high. So bad editing now bothers me more so than it used to.
It's good but I think it can be better if the story is a bit fast It's a little slow for my taste or the chapters could be a bit longer Whatever works