KenjiTezuka
I agree with akhbar 89 this novel is confusing and tries to add way to much information withought consolidating there ideas l. I admit I only read the first 15 chapters and even that was a chore,however so many issues have popped up that makes it hard to read. 1st the status of the mc makes. no since, he is a tranmigrator that somehow also knows of the most popular vr game "War" major players even though his suppose to be from a different world. He is supposedly the world maker/ system while at the same time blending in as a average character who is barely above the supposed professional gamers. what realy got me is he complained about not getting a specialized class advancement event hough easily starts recommending hidden classes to other players and he supposedly designed the hundreds of classes.2nd its way to confusing abouight if this is another world in invading physical plain, virtual world game impacting physical world, excedra3rd character development is terrible. as of so far character development is pretty much , oh this person is... profession player in war as ...class , so they choose .. class. 4th in my oppion the real world elements makes this novel feel dull , as it seems to me it results in alot of deposition that will likely be pointless in the future; when suddenly the novel goes back to the action the characters have suddenly leveled up alot. it for this primary reasons I find this novel confusing and can not recommend it.
I haven't read it yet, but I ain't a snitch so you get 5/5. I just wanted to say, that I think you meant 'beetlejuice' for the title. You got a few spelling mistakes.
Please return the translation for this novel, this is one great novel. More peoples stay wainting for this translation. Dont forget me this novel, pleaseeee.
World building is amazing. The plot is great. Writing style and writing quality is fantastic. Love the characters, they all come to life. Really enjoyed reading it! The scenes are descriptive and every chapter I've read so far were immersive and interesting. I love it!What more can I say??Highly recommended!
This story is one of my favorites, but this slow update speed is unbearable. Please please please give this a reasonable update rate or give it to someone else who will. If this had a 10 ch/week update rate it would probably easily make top 10 on qidian... it deserves more.
100% the best novel except for Outside of Time in the last 5 months. We don’t have to lose braincells from ”cultivation emulator” and ”god level drug dealer system.”
Petition to bring back "I Can See the Lines of Fortune"! A wonderful story to try, especially now that pocket hunting dimension is over. An all around interesting read! Please resume the translation of it! (Trying this as it worked for World of Deities)
And a great novel, I loved it! Keep up the great work author! ................................................................................................................................
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nice novel....and you're a man of culture as wellthe progression is a lil bit slow but its fine..but all in all you did a good writing this novel...FLOORGANG!!!!!!!!!!!!!
major flaw with the system is that it only takes user up to a certain lvl of knowlege from previous people it doesnt inovate so its kinda sucks
Keep up the good work and also the surprise (like the appearance of ichiya) ?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
