It's pretty good so far (20 chapters) and although it is kinda like a l replica of big shot it's a bit different. Overall I think it will be a good read as long as the translation continues to translate well and as long as the chapters are consistent
Shameless review from the author. Guys, I get a lot of complaints about my grammar issues. I have edited some of my errors. So. Please keep reading. And suggest your ideas about my novel. Best of luck everyone.
This is a good LN or should I say that "this is Not a bad LN". However, there are somethings to be aware of. The one thing I have HATED about this LN has been how the Author never has the MC break his enemies bones/bodies into a miserable state that takes a very long time to heal from. I also HATE how the Author never has the MC kill his enemies that really actually try to kill him. What happened to the Chinese saying "the be merciful to your enemy is to be merciless to your self"? His enemies keep coming back to try and KILL him over and over. Who the heck would allow someone to keep trying to KILL them without doing something about it? In RL you would call the police and they would go to jail. In Asian LNs the MC is suppose to KILL them. Not let them come back over and over to almost succeed in killing the MC each time... The only reason I read this on this site is because it is easier to read lots of chapters on QI. This is work that comes from WW's site. They have more chapters than QI.
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This book is ok so far. The translation quailty is about average, but it could definitely be better. There has been many plot holes so far. And the author likes to pull stuff out of his a**. This is definitely a book you read if you have nothing better to read or need a time killer. Overall I would give it a 5/10 or a 4/10 maybe. The story would definitely tick up a notch if the translation quailty improves. But the plot is not horrible and could turn out great. It just might take many, many chapters. The chapters could also become unreadable in the future though. Anyway I would suggest at least giving it a try. ??
Novel was goodIt's a shame its didn't continue........ ........... ........ .. ............. ............................. ............ .................
The story is similar but different in a good way to other books of this genre. I do like the idea of him so far going into a business and technical experience area instead of the normal body/skill of battle that we see so much. I hope to see more.
Unacceptable translation quality and Editing.
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I am sad to say that novel quality is getting worse and worse on this site, and this novel is no exception actual dog **** and really cliche.
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I enjoyed reading your chapters. It has so much potential. The plot of the story was so interesting and engaging.Pls keep writing and Do not stop bringing interesting story to your audience.