TheRuler001
Don't be fooled by the title, this novel is much better than it suggest.It's basicaly normal cultivation nover where the MC joins the Beastmaster sect, so he will go the route of training beasts but he can also fight for himself.Although it is not a fast paced story, the development is quite good and the world building is well explained.The strong point of this novel is that the characters are not brainless, the MC is cautios and acts acordig to logic.I think it's a cultivation novel with high potencial so I hope it gets picked up.
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This the typical cliche reincarnation back in time. I've finished the whole story and it's not bad at all, on the contrary I loved reading it. Also include typical Chinese over the top annoying propaganda of we are always right, typical harem. On the bright it have these . 5 chapters which have very spicy stuffs but not much. You'll love it or hate it.
The first few chapters had made me smile and laughed for a few occasions. To tell you the truth, I rarely laughed and had fun reading novels with light themes. Take MGA where Chu Feng meets Wang Qiang for example, that part was the funniest of MGA chapters.Although I can’t consider this putting the story at the same place as Ultimate Scheming System or The Strongest System, the vibes are there and the author is doing great. I especially enjoyed reading it. For an original, it was rare to find this kind of novel, definitely a worthy novel to indulge your time on. Although I only read 20 chapters atm and felt that the fighting scene is not detailed and dull, I think it would be improved later on. Plotholes? I only see a few of those, but not too glaring. There is nothing to say with the stability of updates, 2 chapters per day, and the author even gives compensation chapter, who am I to complain? Anyways, for World Background, I don’t have a lot to say to the current chapter I have read which is chapter 20. At first, I thought the setting was a Xianxia, but then, I was completely wrong, and then in the following chapter, the setting had change into xuanhuan with a modern setting. The author had not yet explained how did they receive their powers from, or are the human's civilization changes after cultivation arrived in their world. So for World Development, I can’t say anything at the moment. So I give it five stars, but this might change as I further read the story.Character Design - I would rate it 4/5, to be honest. But since the web novel is still on the beginning part, I won’t be too harsh, and such, I would rate it 5/5 for what I have seen.Also, Writing Quality — Man, I don’t have anything to say. Although there were some passive words and a few mistakes, I don‘t really have an issue with it, since it’s really good and the mistakes were not glaring for me to rant about. Definitely, A 4.9/5, For the Writing Quality.Overall 5/5 review base of what I currently read— Chapter 20. The novel is pretty good, and the writing style even made it easier to read, and people would have not hard-time reading it, and even made you smile. So definitely a recommended novel.
Hey everyone, Biako is here, owner of this work. I hope you all like what i have to offer, this is a story that i worked hard in, (you must forgive the grammar though) I am not an English speaker so there will be a lot of mistakes, however, not that jarringAlso, i would like you all to be patient with story, it grows a lot and has ****-ton of world-building that you will certainly be amazed at please read and enjoy the story, i will start updating 5 chapters/day :D but first enjoy the 20 chapter release.Btw, this is my Patreonhttps://***.patreon.com/BoucettaAmrand this is my [email protected] would be more than glad to receive your help financially if you could, otherwise, the story remains free for everyone to read.
TLDR: Rocky start but finds it’s footing soon enough, therefore worth a read.The beginning is rocky. The MC has a slow start that involves the traditional cliché of being derided from others for being a crippled but being allowed where he is due to his status as a consort. the plot starts to moving a bit faster after chapter 20, so stick around as it does get better.There are some plot developments that make little sense that are left opened for later explanations. MC is out for revenge, not a saint by any means, and seems to go the distance to get what he wants: power. Of course, he has not gone off the deep end… yet, as I am sure it will happen as some point. Characters include the traditional bunch of antagonists, a mixture of characters that have more depth that has yet to be seen, and gray characters. I’m currently at chapter 79 and a big moment just happened so I feel comfortable making a review now. I’m sticking with it for a while, as this author has delivered before. Updates are daily and grammar is of course better than majority on webnovel.
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the worst kind of chinese trash I've ever read. 13 chapters in and NOTHING makes any sense. mc is a max level 80 character, but he can apparently be instantly killed in one hit by a level 5 boss. even though in every rpg ever made levels make a huge difference and his sheer stats as a level 80 should allow him to one punch the boss. furthermore hes playing vr like what we have in real life right now, not actual full diver virtual reality. yet hes able to do things and regularly talks about tastes and sounds and feelings you could only experience in a full dive virtual reality. author uses this as a way to introduce his female landlord who demands his 3 months overdue rent, and just comes into his room while hes playing the game and shes impressed and thinks he's like "an awakened lion" because of his perfect control of his character as he slowly whittles the boss to death with his ranged attack and staff that come out of nowhere.... this story has more plot-holes in the first 13 chapters then all of the top 10 stories on this site combined in their entirety.
The real story begins after chapter 70, Before that is boring and unnecessary rubbish that is not worth reading and can be summarized in one sentence "Double class are best and you can learn many spells.!!"
Hi everyone ! The novel [My Idle Gaming System] is a story revolving around Noah Eckert, a naive transmigrator that gradually learns to be ruthless and cunning as he goes through ordeals in the world (Realm) he transmigrated in as he experiences the ruthlessness of the larger Universe he’s in.It will not be a harem like my other novel that is in the same Multiverse as this novel!You can expect a fun ride of fantastical worlds and realms, with powerful beings casting skills we can only think of in our wildest imaginations. Of course, the overpowered system behind it all- the Idle Gaming System, will be explored throughout.It’s fairly fast-paced as my other work, with the two stories actually colliding in the future as in my next few projects, we’ll be watching the main characters of this Multiverse come together for something beautiful!I wish everyone an amazing day, and even more amazing next few years as we build wonderful fantastical worlds ^.^Happy binge reading!
As someone who has caught up to the latest translation as of 24 January 2019. I suggest everyone give the novel a chance. The novel does start off awkwardly, but the author seems to pick up a sense of direction not too long after. There are several ideas that the author wants to bring to fruition, and they are very ambitious. It'll be interesting to see how the author handles it. In terms of the MC: The MC is awkwardly developed in the beginning, but you start to accept the MC's change rather quickly. It's like how Miley Cyrus went from how she was in Hannah Montana to her song Wrecking Ball. In terms of kingdom building: It's fast in the beginning; because the author has many ambitious ideas that he wants to start on. But, the story does slow down to a nice pace later.
A well thought out start to a time travel reincarnation type story. I can't give a can't give an accurate rating due to how short we novel has made it, but I would like to see the story continue.
