Yes, It is yet another shameless author -_-Since it is my first novel, please be understanding about the quality of writing, I am certain that I have improved as I continue writing especially after the ascension (minor spoiler :] )Any questions you may have, comment and I’ll do my best to satisfy your queriesHope you enjoy the book, please make reviews so I know what I am doing right and what I can get better at
another unreadable trash mtl translation
Haven't started yet but I sure will ; I just hope it'll be as intriguing as it sounds. This is the first Horror Story I actually find myself liking...
The story so far is amazing!! Hats off to the author!!!??Love the story progression.. ❤️To all does out there, try this novel for sure!! Though the first few chapters are cliché.. it gets better...The characters are cliché, but considering this to be the first work of the author it's understandable... Though I would suggest you to make the upcoming characters interesting..I would just say that you to keep up the work and don't care for the negative reviews... We have a lot them all over the webnovel ??..But seriously dude don't even think of dropping this novel just like many authors who had interesting stories..., All because of the negative reviews.Just ignore such reviews if they are not making any sense..Once again keep up the good work and try to increase your update speed ????
ok, i like this kind style who use many narration from first pov(protag). For some reason, this is will be my inspiration about narration for my novel which is had deficiency for each chapter.
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Nice start with a suspense?love to read more of its chapter I hope it would also be a great ??♥️♥️thrilling one still a suspense of everything
Please leave a review if you like this and tell me what you liked and don't like so that I can improve. Thanks. I spent 4 hours in writing and 4 hours in thinking so please support this novel.
I really like where this is going and can’t wait to see how the characters develop im personally into a little more descriptive and i guess you can word it in a nice way when it comes to The action But even despite that this is already one of my favorite reads
Good job by our dear mate. Keep writing , keep progressing. We are always there for you.Do more and more progress. Detailed things are here , easy to make films through details?. We need to find the secret to end the darkness of the world. Not only in the novel there is both good energy and dark energy which are around us . We need to identify them not for gaining power but to protect and improve the lives of everyone. Nice start by our dear mate. All the best to you.lots of love Dear Rajib.
We do have a very interesting story here, going from games to cultivating directly. One of the only issues I found was in the loss of punctuation with run on sentences. Rob is interesting to follow but the character in game names is down right strange at times, for example one of his friends is called nohair as a joke and then it happens that he loses his hair. . . Ok. Very good story overall though and no overpowered or broken people yet. Good read can’t wait for more chapters.
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