I’m looking forward to how you make formations relevant to our mc cultivation journey. A interesting way formations was utilized in a novel I’ve read in the past was that instead of having to be set before a conflict to have effect the mc could set one up in seconds as his skill peaked. Also Ik mc usually master multipleskills like pill crafting and weapons forging but I believe it would be refreshing to see our mc specialized in formations only and it would be more realistic.
May this novel be a novel that is not ruined with harem. I pray for thee.Lotta characters are needed. I feel like this is stupid. ..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Interesting idea, but the writing/ editing needs a bunch of work. Everything is choppy and makes it uncomfortable to read. When the author tries to describe things it becomes wordy, description is good, but it needs to make sense and not be so awkward.
A decent quick read with a compelling story idea. The plot summary needs work, make it enticing and intriguing so it pulls the readers more. Give the readers a tease, tease them into reading the story and adding it to their library. It’s like click bait. There were a few grammatical errors like the writer tends to switch grammatical tense from past tense to present tense, which was normal because English was not the writer’s native language. The sentence case was adequate. As much as I love details, this story needs to explain it more properly. It felt lacking in explanation. Like explain how the ranking works in a more precise way so the readers could understand it. The writer did explained some topics but it needs more elaboration. World building needs work, describe the settings to make it more real. Take the time to set the scene. It makes the setting and the story feel more tangible. This goes also for the story development. The story development was sufficient, the story progresses without rushing too much but still managed to keep the story entertaining. In story wise, it is interesting especially when I recently noticed that reincarnation, soul switching and stuff like that seemed to be a trope here in this site. The story has a different approach to it, as it more focused on the protagonist growth and not the romance element, which was new to me but I did saw the tag of Harem. Usually, in the introduction the love interest is immediately introduced but in here, the writer decided to focus to the protagonist and the world building. Which I love about it. Keep up the good work!
Verei, heid ler a historia e espero nao ficar decepcionada, oh, vamos ver Verei e espero gostar da historia, e days personagens da historia sim espero.
This book is very good, I recommend those of you who like books with this kind of genre to read it, I guarantee you will like it. I hope you all will like this book.
Overall a good novel but it is just chaotic and you can't follow the reasoning slowly. all i could say its a pretty solid story line with a good background story I like it but its just Somtimes confusing to me
This story start out good with MC bring his cat along and find way to increase their impressions of him, buying his cat's loyalty with food, massage them, playing with them, caring for their need,... But later he just straight out abuse the new cat, using drug and threat and illusion (ability he got) to trap and trick them into his doing. He trap 10 of them in a small place with only some water, dry cat food and a smartphone for months. Now I'm at ch223 and I quit. Can't stand this heartless MC anymore. I was exerted some co-op play between human and cat. Not this slave owner
I really liked it how it begins but Bro you make no sense and i really can't get myself to read more .You basically waste all his points and literally everything he has on his gf and wait a minuite isn't she already as strong as Saint 9 -_- -_-.Sorry but this really pisses me off and i really don't get myself to read it with his gf.The first thing she does after they met in the new world is ....nothing.He gave her all this and she just stands ther like it is natural that he does this for her and it pisses me off how he is so weak compared to his gf and lrt's look back.He has 7 wishes and his gf is basically on top of the world from the start and he is like a bug /ant and it would all have been okay if she would be more thankful but she isn't he sents 1 million from 5 million of his points for stones she can use and she doen't even says anything and just stsrts to cultivate ??????OK i stop writing because i would just get worse .The idea is really great and i would love to read this story if either ...1. His gf doesn't exits.2. She is much more thankful to him.3. You don't make her as strong as she is from the beginning but either the MC should
Must read. 90.000 year cultivation is better than other million year cultivation novel, the MC is mature and speak less. He like painting, thats why the novel took a lot of chapter just to describe little on going event.
This story is Awesome. It could easily become a top 10 original novel on this site in my mind. The only issue keeping this story back from being one of the best? Grammar. The Author appears to be using Machine Translations to translate this story leaving it full of terrible Grammar. At least the spelling is on point. If the author had an English speaking Editor go through this it will rapidly rise in the rankings. But as is? This story will turn newcomers off really REALLY fast. The grammar is just that horrendous. people even defend the author talking about how he/she has no obligation to better his grammar. Then he paywalls it?
I have read up to chapter 70 and after seeing only positive reviews I thnk the author needs an honest one. WQuality adn SUpdates is top tier, nothing to say, just some minor mistakes but nothing much. The problem is all the rest:Despite being an original, this is exactly like all the CN novels in the good and the bad way. The MC is a reincarnator, yet he doesn't feel and earthling. He gets used to kill immediately and the fact that he is from earth is meaningless to the story, only justify his cheat ability. He is described in the early chapters like a normal good for nothing that yet becomes a workaholic with an indomitable willl after being reborn, for no apparent reason. The WB is kosher, like any cultivation novel there is the dantian, the sea of consciousness, etc. Minor variation but nothing original. A lot of faceslapping, arrogant young lords, and as in CN the avarage IQ of all chars is around 20. Even a patriarch orders amount to nothing thanks to the low IQ. If you are okay with an original novel that is identical to a CN where the MC just trains and kills and has almost no inner monologue aside those about killing and training, that just feels like a pair of pants for the reader to fit, than this is the novel for you.I dropped this after lily's death. Seriously, she was already 1 dimensional, killing her like that is lazy writing to let the protagonist be unchained. Her love didn't affect the MC in the least, he became a cold blooded killer anyway, I don't get why using her in the novel. Could have died from childbirth and no one would notice the difference, not even the MC