Saiyan in Anime Works

This is a great story. Author keep up the good job?.

the 12 death gods (now 9) battle was really cool. looking forward to seeing Azure dragons storyline develope.

Story is fine, around 3.5/5, I'm just giving bad review to show that their new premium system is crap. I'm fine if it was cheaper, but that much for short chapter full of filler and repeated explanations is totally not worth it. You could finish most chapters in less than 5 minutes, only to find out that not even 5 minutes had passed in the story.

The MC is ubsurdly obtuse. You can ignore it if you want and maybe it improves later but as of now it's a very grating read. The writing quality it also quite terrible with whole paragraphs being added that don't need to be there at all. An obvious ploy to inflate the word count. E.g. "Either he could stay here for eternity, or he could jump in the strange river and try to swim for an unknown amount of time. And now, the third option was available, which was to get in the boat and let the Spector take him."This is very early on and when you read this paragraph in context you'll see that absolutely nothing is added. In a way that's almost impressive. As I said maybe it gets better later but early on (~c17) it's just a bad read. As always there's much more that can be said but most of it is negative and you get the general jist.

Please update the next chapter please???????????????????????????? ?????The story is cool ?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

I hate to say it but the main character is a simp. Instead of making her fall in love with him, why does he act like the inferior and goes to mess with that other man. I think she doesn’t like him because he is too nice to her that caused her to Friendzone him.  Like the saying goes in order to capture one must let loose. He should never show that he likes her or she will feel less interested. Simping=Death