nice good story. need more chapters. keep writing
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A unique Dragon novel. I think the way the stoty is going is quite interesting and I'm excited to see how It continues.
hey you have an awesome story here okay well lot of p*** but who cares LOL you do have a good story I love it sometimes it can get a little drug out but for the most part you keep it going and I heard a comment of yours a few episodes ago how people treat you different because of what you've chosen in life don't worry about them don't worry about the haters okay you are who you are love who you are forget what other people are saying cuz it doesn't matter all that matters is what you think of yourself never forget that you're an awesome writer I can tell by your writing you're a good person don't worry about all the other b******* that's all you be you whoever accept you for who you are it's all good f*** the rest
Had a good experience while reading it..... but i think you need to do more work on the details, the dialogues But it is a nice story i liked it...... And i hope you upload the other chapters also so i can complete reading it
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The Idea of bringing farm into another world system is really good. But when the MC start to going all friendly with canon MC and going gryffindork on sorting I stop reading. MC was like I dont want to be OP and stay low key but he was like I want to befriend harry and save people O.O btw he also share his secret including before rebirth.
It's ****. There is very high potential but the author ruined it all. You shouldn't be doing a reset on his character like he is just a toy. He was a human then he physically turned into a "demon" and he starts to kind of act like one when he has been a human his whole life and one insignificant ***** hates on him and turns his personality all corrupt.
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Story just all over the place, i cant even understand wtf is happening. Stop after MC beat demon On yin tournament…......................................................
I'll give the world background a perfect five. Overall I will say the story has a good plot. The writing style is ok but you have to work with some errors. I am not good with grammar so I cannot spot them. But I noticed some errors in capitalization. You willhave to work on that. That's all! ???Hope you will continue writing the story.