Brother Sandeep have step upon his own daoist path. a path unique to himself and unknown to many readers!Invasion of enemie, weapon of destruction and a unique style of writingA must readP.S(install grammar KY to automatically correct minor grammar mistake)Good luck
I can clearly see the author devotion in the book. It's extremely interesting and captivating. I give it full points because I see the high potential in it.
good starter novel for rookie reader that haven't read this kind of genre. other than that, it's painful to read.the story use bad cliche part from KR and CN novel. i can't even pass reading early chapters, so there's no way I'm gonna force myself until ch100+.this novel has potential, i just hope for author to rewrote the novel.
Novels like these are the reason qidian needs to give us a preview chapter in the voting system. So basically this seemed like a cool new cultivation/western fantasy from just reading the synopsis however after first 12 chapters I can tell you it is a rushed pile of sh*t. So we start of with some random mages being described and then straight to our protagonist who is apparently from some fallen clan, typical beggining stuff not great not too bad. And from then the story goes downhill, cultivation is handled poorly we are not showed how did he feel or do his first casting of a spell, which is told of in a one sentence. Next comes a timeskip and before even fully describing what happened author does another timeskip. After that more time is spent with stupid dialogues about rule of the jungle than basic world building. I will not describe everything but these first 12 chapters were simply unimpressive, which is weird since author should show the vision for his novel in early chapters. This story might get better but i doubt it, however the translation quality is good and as for update stablity it is too early to judge.
The story is nice but the character of the mc is a little bit annoying but dont be discourage of my review just keep getting better and better so in the future you will not have a low reviews
man just dont copy try 2 add ur own **** *tell me if i am right , it has versatile mage , that gene one.. , then that goldfinger one.. one piece.. etc. *as im not regular reader, though i think i got some of those mashup novel right.. but still a good way to remember those novel... *hope u dont stop it...
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I've read the raws (not up to the latest chapter) and so will only tell spoilers about what I've read so far.The world building is good so far, at least in China. Organisations and important/relevant locations are clearly explained about and you know what is happening and what has changed in different locations in the country. History of cultivation and what led to the current world is also told about clearly. Though the rest of the world hasn't been explored, it is hinted to do so in the future (western werewolves/vampires).Characters are not one dimensional and have different goals/ideals which are realistic. Lots of time is spent explaining stories about side characters and how they became as they are. The side characters are not stupid/arrogant, know when to back down and know when to act. For example, the leaders of the government want to gain Taoists and also suppress them so they don't betray them (current Taoists can't block bullets, missiles etc.) but also keep friendly relations with the more powerful cultivators like Gu Yu since he effortlessly destroyed their secret teams meant to deal with cultivators and even then it is only because he doesn't have a bloodthirsty/crazed personality (they said they would use everything that had to destroy him if that was the case). Some characters are forgotten (Zeng family) and some are reintroduced a hundred chapters later (a female who happened to find a cultivation manual) but the main heroine Jiang Xiaozhai is not forgotten and is not a weakling who always needs saving. She and Gu Yu are a couple and both are equally or near equally as powerful as the other. They are both overpowered as they are the first or one of the first people to cultivate and are at the very top in the power rankings so far (no one more powerful than them has been introduced unless you count those ancient cultivation remains). They are known as the 'Immortal Couple of Phoenix Mountain' (yes, they own it) and nobody dares mess with them. Currently it is not a harem but a girl they pick up on their travels (Long Qiu), likes Gu Yu but there has been no lover like contact between them as she is treated like a younger sister by the two of them. The reason for her liking him is because she was mistreated in her original village and he is the first man to not mistreat her. Bullsh*t reason, I know (why don't you fall in love with Jiang Xiaozhai as she is the first female to accept you). I checked the latest chapters to be sure (there is no change in their relationship). I really will drop this if he accepts her. The couple are perfect, it doesn't need to be ruined by a third wheel. This always happens in Chinese novels and always ruins them. There doesn't need to be another lover for Gu Yu, so stay as the younger sister.I won't say much about the story but basically, there used to be lots of spiritual essence on the Earth and cultivators were everywhere. However, it suddenly started to disappear until no one could cultivate (reach the first step of cultivation) anymore. Then when Gu Yu started to cultivate he discovered with Jiang Xiaozhai that spiritual essence was mysteriously recovering (they were the first to discover it). They then told the government through a trade and now everyone is trying to adapt and prepare for the change through gaining resources, people talented in cultivation, Taoists with cultivation heritages and making plans on how to notify the citizens of the country about the recovery of spiritual energy (government's problem). Spiritual essence recovery is global. Spirit stones have been introduced and it is said that it will become the main form of currency for cultivators. As for the cultivation system, Gu Yu is only at the beginning and for me, the terms are too hard to translate. Gu Yu has split the initial realm into 5 stages and I believe there are three realms higher than the initial realm (according to ancient cultivation records). Although it hasn't been mentioned yet (or i may have missed it), but I think he is at the 4th stage. Flying is possible at higher realms and true immortality does exist.Is this going to be taken down for too many spoilers? Hope this review answers some of your questions. I used MTL to read this novel so somethings I have understood and said in the review may be incorrect.
Thank you very much, author. This book is very helpful for me who just getting started. I follow the instruction step by step, at least now i'm not strayed anymore. ??
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This is the novel I’ve been waiting for. I am so excited for this novel and where the story arcs. I hope Webnovel picks up this novel. The translation and spelling are well done.
Good story so far...so much enjoyable. Every disciple has their unique character. Sex scenes are very good. But it also have a good plot that it doesnt bore you and it isnt full of bull**** like some other novels...All in all...I am enjoying it very much ...Keep up the good work Auther...It has a lot of potential as it has just started 20 days ago...Give it some time and it will have a lot of Readers....