All around a fantastic read, the imagery is amazing, and i found myself laughing throughout. The plot is entangling, and Keeps you coming back for more.
Overall the story is a cute idea following this highschooler through the akwardness and tribulations of being a teenager. There are several places in the story where things could be fleshed out better however, especially the characters. The only relationship we see fleshed out here is between Dashuan and Ray, and even there we still get too much uneccesary fluff that tells us very little about the characters. Jesicca also starts as a manic pixie dream girl, and isn't given much character development. We still see her as this unrealistic idea of what a teenage girl is like.
And don't be afraid to give your characters each authentic voices! I often found you using the same slang with each character, including Jessica (even though she's foreign).
Lots of potential here! Please proofread your work and make your characters shine! We don't need to know all the specifics of bball!
So basically it is what the sypnosis says.
the mc and the fmc swaps body every three days.
thats about it.
though there is not much world background as the first 60 chapters resolves around the body swap like what they do and how.
overall, its an unique plot I guess.
Translation is 5 stars
story development is 4 stars
Character design is 5 stars
updating stability as always 5 stars
world background is 3 stars.
overall 4.4 stars
a Chinese transmigrated into japanese...,,.......................................................................,..........................
After reading the initial free 70 chapters, I decided to leave another review for author-san. So far, the novel is on a normal pace but the world is being slowly opened to the readers. The novel really lives up to his name so I will continue reading it
Practices such as cannibalism, sacrifice, hunting zombies, and survival are all depicted properly and I think the book will go down a good route. Yongrui is also leveling up normally and he isn't any weaker nor stronger against those around him, which makes it balanced. Death encounters and survival are also pictured in the book so well that you can really see the outbreak happening right before your eyes! And also, the comedy, romance and seriousness of the novel has a nice balance to it (the first part was focused on the comedic side but it gets serious down the line).
I will continue reading it! Once again, good job author-san. I wish you all the best in this book :)
truthfully I got lost just within the first 12 or so chapters, nothing is explained and the events feel extremely jumbled and out of place, the grammar it self is good and I could see this improving but I feel the whole beginning would have to be re-written once again in order for the flow of the story to be back in order
I love Entertainment Industry Novels So go you and pleaseeee continue this and dont drop because even though I havent read its the entertainment industry and a systemWhat can be better <3
Love the story and want to read after 40! Please don't let this story not get picked! I'll literally cry if I can't read more! Alright, done, wait why do I need to have so many words?!
Ive read this story to chapter 91 but i have to say the quality is good spelling and all that but reading this story gave me wip lash there is no real constant story to it everything changes and there is almost no link to the flow of the story caracters are half flushed i feel if the author could pick a direction in the story and stick with it and work on the caracters they could make a amazing story with their creativity but as this story is its almost as if its 4 stories half a.s.sedly stuffed together not to mention the random skips that unnecessarily jump time to progress plot where there was more to be shown and would of made the story far better with the detail at witch the story sorely lacks id rate this lower totally but the quality of the general writing was good and it seems to update often its the content of the story that lacks any real value and if the author can fix that could be a amazing writer as its the main part of any story
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A very slow novel, it's not recommended for people who don't like to read slow novels. I never give novels higher than a 4* or 4.5*, since novels have mistakes here and there. I'll continue to read to see how the characters and world background grow and whatnot. Keep up the good work Author!