When I first read their conversation and the Angel's reason, I unconsciously facepalmed.
I hope you can physically feel it as you read this.
But as I continue reading this made me giggle like a child. Imagine a 20 year old grown man rolling in his bed and giggling.
I'll go back and read the rest. Cheers
P.S.
Thank you for the laughs, Mr./Ms. Author.
this was so hard to read for some reason and the way you describe things is appalling. could not get past the free chapt sadly not worth it for me.
You know, I gotta give the writer their props. They know how to write a story. I’ve genuinely enjoyed this novel. I haven’t been on this app long, but I have been on it long enough to know that there are a lot of books like this. That being said this one stands out because it’s not afraid to be unique. At least not in a way that confuses the audience/readers.
I can’t how many time I’ve laughed out loud reading this novel. I’ve had genuine reading it. I think it’s a great recommendation. Good job author!!
It is unfortunatly very bland. after mc initially fights back against bullies after getting stronger he just doesn't do anything... based on his background he should be filled with anger and thoughts of revenge.. but nope. nothing. everyone who bullied him, teachers who ignored it, parents who underfed and completely ignored him, brother who despised him. nothing. no mention of his emotions/plans.
Additionally, there is no drive to grow stronger quicker by seeking out opportunities to absorb mana from people (bullies would be the prime targets, and he could do it outside of school avoiding the excuse of a teacher detecting it) or by getting his hands on beast cores. mc is content with living a normal school life and working a normal part time job to pay the rent. thus we just get normal school arc, taking classes, small duels and stuff. all this while an actual tournament arc is looming in the distance, which I cant imagine will be any better.
Bland is the best word I can think of to describe it. With that said, the premise and writing quality is good and the story is by no means irredeemable if author better explores the emotional side of the mc. Either by having him use his newfound powers to get revenge (I feel like it would be reasonable for a kid in his situation to let the power get a little bit to his head and walk down a darker path) or by clearly motivating to the reader why this isn't happening, maybe he is struggling with such feelings but is able to hold the back.
The way the system works is bery interesting. And the MC isn't a coward wich is always a plus point for me.
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The fighting scene is cool. The plot development is good. The MC is smart. It looks fast paced, the MC's strength grew very fast.
i like the suspense and the team dynamic, a very good novel
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Cliche master, master of all cliches. All the cliches that I don't likeMc transmigrates☑️finds out he'll be kicked out of the sect if he doesn't ...☑️Struggles but fails ☑️gets a panel golden finger ☑️ergo the training montage ☑️gets super strong and skilled and comes back better than before☑️also, he just has characteristics that I don't Super naive super kindsuper polite and amiableI mean you're in a ruthless cultivation world. Sooner or later it will backfire. He's just so easily targeted all the time. And his "friends" Target him too.
And now we're talking about detectives. I LOVE DETECTIVES. This should be worth more than a thousand reads! The writing on the synopsis alone is very well written. But I hope the chapters will be balanced—solving cases and well, romance. Continue writing, author!!
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