The start of the story is great, but from about chapter 180, there are dozens of chapters with repeating contents, missing huge chunks, and having numerous chapters out of order. With such a large section of chapters being basically unreadable, there is no point to read this novel for free, let alone needing to pay for it.
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Wonderful novel, people criticising it without even reading not realising it's beauty. Loved to read and about to finish.
Starts well, and then both the story and the translation get worse and worse until both are trash.
hello dear author I will give my little review.
1. I liked this story a lot, the romantic development of each character that I have been able to observe is beautiful and it is not immediate, it takes its time.
this was a wonderful story, saddly after covid hit, they have never updated so this story will be forever incomplete. soo many good stories happened this way
Amazing story. The most unique thing about this story is that it is written by a Pakistani and written in Pakistani style. Good luck author in writing more novels in future
Please cut down on the banter please get those ratings up or they will drop... i would not like that to happen... step up ur game plz ... u can do better....
Thank you for the Adventure. Please continue releasing more chapters. Dont give up! This is an amazing story thus far. The backstory detail is phenomenal and the characher detail is so amaxing i can vividly see them
A good start and it interesting
this fanfic is amazing. Don't drop plz i love the idea and it has amazing potential
Grammar is a little :( but in overall measures, you are doing good.
The novel hooked me and I don't plan to leave it soon.
Loved madd and Jessica relation and how they met.
Also loves the way you search for real-life data to insert in your novel, this gives a good realistic taste and its very good.
You can get better with the time, and i am looking after it