This is really good .The author is evolving with each chapter ...I'm glad his relationship with his 'mother' and servant is going well ... that said, I beg you not to drop this romance ... I'm in love with her!
Reviews brought me here but the chapters are very little.........keep up the hard wirk auther san☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺?????????????????
This is the first time I've seen the author change the cover image, hope this mean the author will not leave this abandon. The original was quite great and I was really sad that it to was discontinued, but while this version seems a little weak (the mc) and less versatile, it does not seem like it was rush so it has a better base. All this author's novel are for lack of term novel (as in novelty) and I really hope he not abandon any of his/her work, cause their really worth reading.
Loving the story so far.. and the readable writing quality. No MTL or unreadable english. Hoping you don't drop it. Would love to see how this story continues to develop, love the OP MC vibe.
alguien puede hablar con algun traductor o editor de qidian que nos pueda hacer el favor de preguntar a la gerencia de qidian si planean seguir traduciendo esta gran novela? o preguntar a alguno de sus amigos traductores si quieren continuar con esta novela?
Great read, although I wish it had more updates.
This is one of the best novels I've stumbled upon in a very long time. I highly recommend it!!I love the originality of the story, it is very engaging and the writing is excellent. The characters are unique and I enjoy how they interact with each other. My favorite is Tycon, so I think I'm starting a fan club, although I am not sure he would like that lol.The Author does an amazing job keeping the story interesting and his sense of humor cracks me up. Keep up the good work Author!!!
Lots of spelling, lexical and grammatical mistakes.. Sometimes it is hard to understand the meaning of the sentence, often misspelled he/she/his/hers, kind/king etc. A lot of repeatability, repeating words, repeatedly, saying the same again and again, then repeat it. Definitely needs an editor. Story development is something subjectively, it is a bit slow for my liking, but it is a good story and it could raise into something great, while character development is pretty good, yet not too fast or too deep, you can feel the characters and there is a lot of space left for their development. As for world background 45 chapters deep, I know almost nothing. It's some casual city [suggestion], guess it is something reader has to create while reading. As for stability of updates I have just started yesterday, seeing in early chapters in author notes saying (2 a day, then 10 a week, then 5 a week, 12,4,7,20,1... For god's sake couldn't it be juse when you have time even one a week would be enough if not announced 10 a week. Author (yes actually author) is writing 4-5 or maybe more idk. novels at the same time, not good enough quality even asking for donations under every single chapter. *I am quiting*. Please edit your plain texts, concentrate on one or two novels at a time, keep the good story and chapters, maybe add a single detail either on VR and real world and I will be more than happy to continue reading and donate.
The concepts are good (Meaning, I liked it). First of all, I was kind of lost in the first half. The second half made more sense. At times it got a little boring, especially the info dump part of part one. but as I said, the concepts are good and I like cats. ( I have five grown-ass cats in my house.) I wish you good luck ahead.
A rare gem. Quite different from most novels on this service. While several of the categories you might throw it into (reincarnation, system, gender-bender) are fairly common, this novel handles them differently. None of these elements feels intrusive. This isn’t a story about someone being given god like powers and going on a conquest, it is about several well developed characters trying to survive a bad situation. Some of the characters may seem irrational or evil at first, but attention to subtleties quickly hints towards deeper realities that are further revealed as the story goes on. With a little effort to try to understand their complexities, each character of the main cast is likeable.Writing quality is excellent, the author shows true talent with words. While there are a couple of typos and awkward choices of words near the start it remains easy to follow and the artful composition easily makes up for it. The later parts approach a level of finish you might find coming out of a traditional publishing house.That leaves only one last point. The only down side of this novel is that it is unfortunately abandoned. I normally avoid abandoned novels, but given the number of chapters I figured it might be completed so I gave it a try anyways. While it doesn’t reach the end, it develops enough to understand where things are going and leave the reader somewhat satisfied. Even in its current state I would recommend it. If the author does every decide to complete or restart the novel again I will eagerly read it.
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I have been following this work for a few months now and can’t get enough of it. The two lead characters are strong, witty and have good chemistry. The world has just the right amount of conflict to keep you engaged and the story seems to be progressing at a good pace.Keep it up author!