Welcome to "Everything will be my way!".You are expected by more than 10 arches of interesting adventures of an unusual young man.Enjoy reading.
I really love this novel! It is quite fast paced -which i like-, the translator rarely misses an update, while the quality is really good and has shown improvement steadily. As for the novel itself, there is not much of a character development going on. For the MC yes but not for anyone else. So many characters are left behind. They may apear radomly as well so we get a sneak pick on what they have been up to, but the (chapter) gaps get bigger as the story develops. The same goes for world building. Not many details -which i ironically like- just enough to get you excited but by the time the MC moves on you still haven't discovered even a small part of a place. That can be the result of the fast pace the author is writing to get the interest going.I am quite concerned on how it is going to end. It reminds me of another novel development-wise and a second one world-building wise. We will see! All in all, it is a great pick if you like fast paced plots, a quite powerful MC and do not mind the world and character development. Oh, i have read up until 648 if anyone wonders. Please be patient when you start reading it- 100ish chapters at least if i remember correctly-. It gets better!
For reference, I believe I am on chapter 74 right now, so whenever I say recently, I mean recent to this chapter. While there are 94 chapter up right now, I’m dropping it for reasons stated in this review.Writing Quality: 4/5, if I was able to give half stars i would give this a 3.5, but I can’t so it gets 4. Anway, there is a significant amount grammar mistakes, bad sentence structure, sentences that don’t make sense, and some random POV switches. Really, I would give this 3 stars but I commented most of the time when I saw grammar mistakes and the author fixed them. Also, there are an annoying amount of exclamation marks, even for the most mundane things. MC walked to the store! MC drank some water! Yada yada... Finally, there are some situations which just dont make sense, for example, someone extends their arm and it gets cut off, and blood splashes on their face, or an 8 meter tall monster hits MC from 20 meters away. Overall, it could be better, but it’s not so bad to the point that it ruins the novel. Author if you read this, please just reread your chapters when you finish writing them and the majority of your mistakes can be fixed.Updating Stability: 4/5, 7 chapters a week is a little above average but the main reason I give 4 stars is that the chapters have extremely varied lengths, where some chapters have double or triple the length of others, and I’ve seen the author write in notes that they won’t be able to update for a few days sometimes. Overall, pretty good.Story Development: 2/5, now this is one of the biggest disappointments in this novel. From chapter 55ish to 70 could be summed up with a single sentence yet was drawn out to the point that I actually considered dropping the novel. In the beginning chapters I was impressed as it seemed like author would be going against cliches since there were smart nobles and not so evil bandits, however it seems that the author has regressed for whatever reason and is now putting in the generic arrogant nobles and random evil bandits in. Also, just recently the author put in the generic “infinite worlds and they are in the weakest one” just like in a xianxia where the MC starts from the smallest ****tiest continent and works to the mainland. Again, in the beginning I had high hopes for this as MC started out in the mainland of the world he was born in. Maybe author really is regressing because he has to keep up with his 7 chapters a week? Overall, the novel just gets more disappointing the longer I read.Character Design: 2/5, same as before, it started out extremely promising, with MC being stoic and lazy, as the tags say. However, once again, I get disappointed. MC was taken in by somebody and spent 4 years of his life with her, with the author showing many times that he really cares for her, even to the point of limiting his growth, yet when she eventually dies, what is his reaction? Absolutely nothing. He does nothing. The side characters are very one dimensional, so much so that I can sum up both of them with the same single sentence: They care about nothing except their master(MC). Not much to say about them except I don’t care about them at all and hope they die so I don’t have to waste my time reading about their worthless reactions. Also, author has several plotholes regarding the strength of MC. This includes when author mentioned that MC can control the Ball of Purity to the point where an ordinary person can’t see it, and then contradicted himself and apparently even to the chapter I have read up to he still can’t do that. And while this next one isn’t truly significant, it’s still irritating. So it was said before that MC can control his Ball of Purity 10 meters away from his body, and recently he got a huge power up, and can control it.... 9 meters away from his body! Anyway, it’s kind of annoying how author creates plotholes when he desperately tries to nerf MC. Oh yeah and when MC was fighting the monster in recent chapters, author just basically said “MC has a headache so he makes retarded decisions” which was really frustrating to read. Finally, there is 0 character growth for MC. This can be seen when his caretaker dies and he doesn’t give a ****. Overall, pretty disappointing.World Background: 3/5, so really we know very little. All we really know is that he is in a pretty big kingdom in the mainland of his world, and we just recently learned that there are many stronger worlds(which as I already said, I severely disapprove of). The magic system is pretty basic, just absorb Mana and become stronger, infuse Mana and become physically stronger. Also, in the beginning, there were no set systems, and it seems like the author just adds stuff whenever he thinks of it, for example how mages gain strength, the addition of layers of cores, and very recently, the stages in each rank, and as that it something whIch should be mentioned in the beginning, it led me to my previous conclusion. Overall, nothing too great, but not too bad.Author: 5/5, I know this isn’t a category I can actually rate, but I figured I’d make my own since it’s pretty important. Author is very responsive and fixes the majority of mistakes pointed out to him, and is generally nice to his readers, so that’s a plus.TL;DR: I’d give this novel a shot, and if author reads this review and takes constructive criticism, then the rating would absolutely improve.**: This is definitely the longest review I’ve ever written, at 5485 characters.
Author here. As this is just the beginning wanted to give you guys a heads up. This novel is going to be a Harem novel with some mature content. So those who have Harem or have suggestions about it, I'll hear them in comments. Back to the story, as you can already guess this story take place in Martial world with clans, empires, etc. There are many legacies in this world left behind by some of the strongest cultivator and even of some unknown. Our Mc recieve the inheritance of Demon God, also known as Death god . There are many mysteries regarding this legacy, it's secrets and how it ended up on mc's planet. But that will be disclosed at the right time. There is many good things to come. So stay with me and if possible add to your reading list. I'll try not to disappoint you. If you have suggestions or some ideas about the story I'll hear them and possibly include in the story. And a Biiiig thanks to everyone reading.
One of the most spineless MC I have ever seen to the point that I wanted to punch my screen because of how much of a masochist he is. The girls always beat him up and only help him if someone with more powerful orders them but not before beating him up and what does he do, he gives this same girls that beat him up just a few moments ago the energy orbs that he uses to cultivate to them so they can become stronger and his reason is that they helped him. They didn't help you dumbass the use him beat him up and he still thinks that they are helping him. If they were so worried about the human race existence the leaders of the race (the sages) would have given him all the resources and technics that he needs instead of making him pay for them. if he became stronger than he could protect the human race and help produce more prodigy's for the human race. So if they help him by giving him the techniques and god arts now they would be helping themselves in the long run. But no he has to complete missions and accumulate points slowly because stupid reasons. If you were in his position wouldn't you negotiate do get the best teachers and techniques in exchange for him producing more prodigy, if they don't agree I could just leak my existence and powers to other races an course chaos in the whole galaxy, maybe even on a whole larger scale.And if you still didn't figure it out the MC is a complete and utter moron
why the **** does he cares about shield just do what you want your powerfull shield will come to him eventually for weapon and shit so why be a prisoner
You know what is coming with a story like this. Racism. Doesn't even make it 20 chapters before it starts so you know it is going to be wild ride. Not sure why China is by far the worst when it comes to this. It's not just patriotism it's racism and a everyone not from China is a terrible evil person in most of these types of novels and they are so common.
Not a lot is yet available with this story, but it's entertaining and i think it has a high chance of developing into something good. i look forward to updates.
It’s even better than the first version but when is he gonna use other vampire powers as the feratu heir he has the powers of all the vampires so why is he only using the tome
i think ntr stories usually written by someone with weird fetish.a person who got green shouldn't be harem god.i think author thought mc as his enemy when he wrote this
The classic case of a story with no ending. Where plot scenarios are repeated every 100 chapters(out of the 5k+ chapters) but using different names for the enemies that end up having the exact same personality and goal as the last enemy. It's not the worst story on this site, but it isn't average nor a good read. Considering the amount of novels flooding into this site, you really shouldn't ever run out of better stories to read, to justify picking this one.
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