I wanted the main character to fall in love with only one person.
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Oooooooo, I was actually hooked, what an organic progression, loved it. 10/10. Definitely would read again some day. Nice job author keep it up please!
Really nice and clever story. Quite unique technology and cultivation fusion setting. The translation at the beginning leaves something to be desired, but it gets better towards the end.
im not really good at making reviews so all i got to say is this is one of the best concepts for a story and has one of my favorite main characters so far and i hope it gets the attention it deserves (yes im getting on my alts to review to show that i am sorry and hope it gets more people to read this)
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The story so far has been very engaging and the premise of the protagonist, Yun Lintian that "supposedly" reincarnates without cheat powers is very interesting for an eastern fantasy novel. The author managed to keep us enthralled by dropping hints about the protagonist's mysterious past and hopefully, future "cheat powers" which the protagonist so comically complains about not having so often. The protagonist, being an avid Xianxia reader himself has entertained us with modern jokes combined with "fourth wall breaking" within his inner monologues, has never failed to leave me with a chuckle. His well-written character development gives you an insight into how really each person’s relationship to him is, to a point where you may even feel connected and share feelings with them.
One can ignore its minor grammatical quirks, as this novel has impressed me with how well written it is as an original novel, and with its world-building and attention to detail, it definitely made me feel as though i was reading a translated Chinese novel. Its in-depth plot, pacing, interesting characters, and especially the very likable and smart protagonist leaves me with an impression of: "This is a quality novel".
This is a great read overall and I am looking forward to the unveiling of its mysteries, the protagonist’s future development and his connection with the other characters. This is a Xianxia novel with abundant potential. Keep up the great work author!
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Started good but it is getting worse, this novel must be about going into various dreams and doing things in them but its focus is about being on normal op stupid mc in a modern world
Considering it's a translation, I won't bother reviewing the story. Suffice it to say, it's a dumpster fire. Read if you feel like your life is too long.
As for the translation. It's understandable, even if the use of English is poor.
La historia puede empezar un poco lenta y desconocida ya que siempre trato de leer fanfic pero es un historia interesante que cada día va mejorando y lo mejor hasta el día de hoy no se si donde llegara eso es lo bueno de una historia original nunca se sabe que tendrá
I really do not know what to say about this story. It does not seem to be outstanding so far, but conversely it does not seem to be bad either. It is really too early to tell with 20 chapters. For me this one is a wait and see situation.
I like the novel but I'll stop ch 30. Author should read other novels on how it goes, pacing to fast for me, too many things happen short amount of time. Also one thing i hate in novel, they tend to give mc problems/hurdles every now and then, like give him a damn brake i hate it in xianxia/wuxia novels. Thats all i would love to read more but if this keeps same i wont give a shot to read this again