The only thing lacking is stability of updates. Of course I understand that good stories need time yet I will give 4.8....................................
it's confusing from the start I don't know what I am reading why does the mc know things he never heard of before I'm confused at least give explanation in the end like it's unique. but gives up understanding for the new readers I feel like I'm hearing words nót sentences but words
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Great storyline. Great character design. Great romance plotline. overly it's just a really good story. I highly recommend it.
keep it up Author
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The world was set to a fantasy world! I am intrigued by the story and how will the story progress! The authors knows how to narrate vividly. It has potential in the future if I will look at it! Kudos author! Write more and you will improve more!
i am actually interested in original novel... seems like a good read..however this westernized POS totally kills any value of this novel. instead of transmigration into past with historical knowledge, it becomes generic transmigration into the past in authors fantasy world. ffs idk why i even try "new novels" when they are mostly generic westernized POS.
i really like it i really want to see a sukuna in mha villain one though other than my feeling its really good keep it up
it was really good for a first time writer,the first chapter is a little bit confusing to know who's talking but after awhile the story is getting good and the plot is interesting i hope it gets more update.
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I mean, I think it's pretty good, but I'm very biased. Still, if given the chance, might as well advertise it myself. It's a slow burn, and he doesn't get OP quick, nor do I know if he ever will. It's not a typical power-fantasy. You probably won't like every single plot development, because taste differs. There are more lighthearted, and also darker parts. I, as an author, would recommend you read all of it. The story gets better with every chapter, or so I like to think, as the world and cast expands, but if you really can't stand the writing, that's fine as well. In any case, I hope you decide to give my story a try, and can see past it's flaws.