Paradox_Crystal
Good story. I really enjoyed the sequence of events in this book. They are coherent and the author did a good job. The characters have character and personality. The description is very vivid and interesting.
If this is a pirated copy of another's work without proper credits nor permission from the original, then it's not worth reading it here.
The author seems to think he's done nothing wrong and has admitted that he is "sharing" the novel on this site, but instead of listing it as a translation.... It's an original? This is where miscommunication causes misunderstandings.
I can't even describe how bad this is couldn't even handle the first couple chapters and everything is jumbled its like 10 times worse than even the lowest quality Chinese fanfic I've read and that itself was pretty bad and I can't express how much of a headache I have now because of this
This is a really good story with good build up so far. Really looking forward to more chapters.
Since it's only one chapter so I cannot say much but as I read your story, the characters seems likeable and the storyline looks interesting and it was a nice reading with minor grammar mistakes, as I've seen so far. Keep up the good work, author :)
The novel is good. The sentence structure could use some fixing. Too many run on sentences and some periods or commas could help. Grammar could also use a little tweaking. Author just has to make sure that he goes over what he writes or just use grammarly.
None human MC with evolution as long as he doesn ’t become a wife collector this should be a fun ride
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Hi! My second review here! Now I want everyone to know that it's been a great opportunity to write for you guys. Comments keep coming in, readers keep reacting, things like this makes me motivated to write more. Now as for the content, if you're new here, you might see some inconsistencies in the early chapters. It's not the grammar or spellings, but the characters.Now, I have addressed the situation and done my best in the chapters ahead to tell about the many characters that got introduced.Enough with this rant ?, hope you will read this novel!And have a great year everyone!
I tried to get into the story but the MC is a b complaining about everything when he has a second chance at life
The novel is a relaxing story. There's some action here and there but its more of a slow paced story. The MC is an Otaku with an interesting personality. Great concept and it is a pretty good story overall.
The MC from an ordinary world travelled back in time, but he arrived in a parallel reality where martial arts exist and have a heavy influence in society. It is similar to World’s Best Martial Artist, but I would prefer not to compare it to that trash.
His cheat allows him to simulate a world and assume the identity of a random person there. 10 years in there was equivalent to a moment in the real world, so you would expect a mature MC. At this point, It is similar to 48 hours a day.
Also, his experience in the simulation was not just some filler, the plot is actually well thought out.
It is a decent read.
