Hello, Joel_Blyden I read your book and like your concept for the novel, I am the author of "E=MC²: The Etherium Equation" and "Eternal Rebirth: The World Within" and would like to connect with you and discuss further plot of novel or ideas over it
Everything about this novel is good except the mc's progressing. I mean there so many level to the top that it will take literally 1000 chp to finish pbly. Thats why I currently stopped at 189 and waiting for at least 500 chp. Otherwise everything seems perfect to me especially the harem. I like how the girls get along so well.
This is a nice fusion of science and magic. Now latest revision got galactic battle. looks like a rewrite of star wars and jedi? make it good please. Thanks and Ohayo.
Bro your book irritates me at this point
I took a chance and spent more than Two Thousand Coins in one go to read this novel.The story is about a young man named Karl and his journey as a Beast Master in an Academy. The initial onset of the story is intriguing, and you give allowances for pacing, detail, and depth in the beginning of all novels as an author is just started to build the world. There are no major mistakes of writing being done in this novel, which is great news. Spelling is great, and the author never uses a larger unknown word when a simple one will suffice. The novel world building leaves you with the initial impression that the world is less advanced, but in fact, it is just geographical to the main character circumstance. The descriptions of people, places, and things is on par for a webnovel, which is to say lacking. I found it lacking in description, and that hurts world immersion. Pacing wise the story is a race to the finish but you are not quiet sure if it is actually moving fast or not because there is no overarching goal for the main character unless you count getting stronger of which Karl does very fast. Let me ask the question: Who is the antagonist?The main mystery is the System, the ancient power of the world dragon. In this Karl is unravelling the mystery faster than anyone has in hundreds of thousands of years. So yes, the story is lacking in sub-plots. Absolutely.The Magic system and Training. Arguably, one of the reasons many of us read these novels and we as an audience are hypercritical, but of course, we are a paying audience. There is a system that the character is trying to unlock, but is is only partially unlocked. Karl is only able to use some of his powers, but training is not confined by these limitations, yet the guy never really trains in any discipline. The initial experience of the academy was not enough to warrant his skills. I could go in more detail but as an audience member following along in the novel I found myself not being able to believe Karl was actually skilled. The written Style of BattleKarl as a Beast Master is endowed with skills such as Rend, and with some training and adjustment, he seems to be able to manipulate Rend and use it in different ways. I for one love this it is absolutely the greatest. You see this in the best novels written by the most creative writer on this platform. Yet the written battle style plays out like an MMO damage dealing scene...=( It is disappointing. If there was a build up of written word that showcased Karl's training dedication to some kind of martial discipline you would not be able to see it from the way the battles are written. They follow a buff, attack, shield, suprise and win format. Karl as a written character has not really grown. His rank has gone from Awakened to Commander leaving Royal, Monarch and Overlord left more if they haven't been reached or mentioned but has Karl grown? Nah, not really.At this point Karl has just reached Commander Rank. Write the character into some training give his skill set some depth and show us the ingenuity of him learning to use his skills outside the box.There are some incredible novels on here Aoki this can be one of them. That said, you're finding success as is so yeah Good luck.
This story is one that i would like more if. I really hope it continues to progress. Author keep up the great work. I need more story. The only draw back is that we do not see enough of the merging of two lives. How is it going to work? I need to know more please
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Goof Novel, keep updating author.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!1
There only 5 or 6 chapters of this novel so far and it seems as though its been a year aince update i.e. the low score What has been written i truly enjoyed however why introduce a movel with so few chapters and no updates at all☹️☹️
I don't care ima get those ratings back up. I don't care ima get those ratings back up. I don't care ima get those ratings back up. I don't care ima get those ratings back up.
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I’m sad that this isn’t Silent Clown... I misread it as such, and it would have made such a good title! Like a mime, but better! Think of it, if this was the silent clown, you’d have a cultivating mime running around being a badass while being like, “You’re in a box! Let me pull it with this invisible rope.”