1. Writing quality is bearable.2. Story development is very forced. Every passive skills become useful with no setup in the next sentence. He would be peaceful for 3 months, gain a battle skill, and a conflict will arrise out of nowhere in the next sentence.3. The MC is dumb. Sometimes having a dumb MC can be fun in a comedy. The problem is that this story tries to be dark. This makes the MC just frustrating. The only reason he can survive even a single day is that he got lucky and has a system. Worst of all, the MC is arrogant and thinks that he is smart while making the dumbest actions and statements.4. Not sure about stability so I gave it a 3 as a middle value.5. The background is terrible. The sect makes no sense and the rules the author introduces gets broken in the next. He does try to think of a "fresh" twist to a sect so I give 2 stars for effort. The problem is that some archetypes are there for a reason. Sometimes that is just an inevitable outcome of logical progression. An example of this would be greedy and selfish people always being in power as the antagonist. This is inevitable when only those that are greefy and selfish can climb over others to gain the wealth and power they have. Once you try to subvert expectations and break archetypes, it instead just breaks logic. So good attempt but poor execution.Overall it was a poorly executed story with an interesting premise. I would not recommend.
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<<<<<+>>>>>Writing Quality 5/5Stability of Updates 3/5Story Development 5/5Character Design 5/5World Background 5/5<<<<<+>>>>>Total Score 4.6/5<<<<<+>>>>>
Did they seriously just spell humanoid wrong? Dearest friend, with a spelling mistake in the title, I have no trust in your ability to check for errors along the way.
Two chapters in and this story is pretty cool! The descriptions of the fighters is really cool and the fight scenes are very intense. I feel bad for the MC because of how he is treated by both his coworkers and his audience.I found a few grammatical errors but nothing too huge. Overall, great story!
Nice one....readers need new chapters ASAP.....figure of speech well composed....I wish I can wake up to a new chapter everyday......I love the way you describe characters.... It's so lovely
It sucks that this book isnt putting out anymore chapters!! I really liked this book!!
Good novel. Slow start but is very exciting later on. Very complex plot but still manages to hook your attention and doesn't appear overloaded. Cold and smart protagonist who very rarely does stupid mistakes. And even if he does it's psychologically understandable. If you're looking for happy to lucky face slapping, please move on. But if you're looking for a novel with good plot progression and almost realistic characters who are hellbent on destroying each other and themselves, this might be for you. Beware: this novel is BRUTAL.
Its a great novel but its lacks any real character. It's always the MC does this or that and no real feeling by any people in the story that makes you feel what kind of person they are. I've only read up to the fiance part and I can say there is nothing for me to root for. Even the MC power makes things convenient and has everyone behaving like zombies without any free will of themselves. What kind of enjoyment is it to read when everyone doesn't have a mind of their own aside from the bland MC.Another issue is the grammar and spelling issues. The author is in dire need of an editor. That all said I love the concept but I don't find myself wanting to read another chapter with no personality to speak of within the novel.
This is such a great book witha an amazing plot , the blurb of the story says it all , you write so well and top of all this is an outstanding book . I like the spirits of both of your leading characters .keep it up and would sure recommend this book ❤❤❤..
Hello, everyone!I'm one of the translators working under NomYummi on TKA, Jouissance! Just here to say that we hope you're enjoying our translations (and our bonus chapters) and we'll do our best to carry this through and give you the best translations! TKA will be going through a bit of refining in the near future and remember to check the Wikia, where additional information can be found (but beware of spoilers!)I myself am on chapter 1449 right now, and I can assure you that this novel just gets better and better, and even has an awesome prequel called Top Glory, so keep reading!Also, some very shameless advertising: There are two rather active discord channels that we know of (after I notified Nom of the existence of the comments section XD)The following link goes to the less spoiler-filled, more chat-based, slightly more tame (???) and very, very active discord with bots aplenty.https://discord.gg/PpRnvgKThe following link goes to the more art/fanwork-based and nearly equally as active discord that has a NSFW section and shippers aplenty.https://discord.gg/GyHZgQTThey have both been previously advertised, but we decided to make it official. I think there might be more - I know there's apparently a dead one derived from the reddit - but me and Nom know of and are on these two, haha.The next link takes you to the wikia!http://the-kings-avatar.wikia.com/wiki/The_King%27s_Avatar_WikiaAnd last but not least is our Patreon, where you can come to support us, read ahead and push us into releasing more often, haha!https://***.patreon.com/nomyummiAnyways, that's about all I have to say! Look forward to seeing you on the discord servers!All the best,Jouissance
i want to say the idea is heavily based on "i have a mansion in the apocalypse