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Fast paced and everything is ok-ish...But sometimes I question whether I reading English or other language....Pls,pls,pls improve your writing quality or you will keep losing your potential readers
Nice book. It needs support ........................................................................ ...................... .. . ... ..........
I look forward to the continuation of the story dear authorI look forward to the continuation of the story dear authorI look forward to the continuation of the story dear author
this is just made for harem, but this is the worst circumstance to get one. you got a girl that loves you to death and you cheat on her? don't do that. it's just sooooo wrong, I mean, yeah you could get stronger but you got an op wife so you can spend your time with her and get stronger over time. idk someone might like it but this is just a warning to those that won't like this.
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good plot...............................................................................................................................................................and i hope that you dont drop this novel and take your time to continue writing.....
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It is difficult to judge from a single chapter, but from the Cultivation Manual and the first chapter rhe novel seems pretty interesting, specially how the technology has been devolved and how the people use older machines to work. It is also nice to read how the culture and the general happenings of the world are indirectly mentioned in the novel.All the best!!!
Ok from the starts this story is set to make anyone that thinks logical go insane. He was nr. 1 in the world with the best guild why accept the fight in the first place , but with that contract this crosses illogical thinking into retardation if the things were reverse yes that would have made some sens but even then why risk it , even as nr.2 the amount of money and influence he would have to risk it on a duel kinda idiotic .
Raw: 我有十个历练分身Author: 飞起玉龙三百万Status: Completed, 241 chapters.I've completed reading the raws, and while he hurried the end I liked it. Not many novels have the greatest of endings, especially new authors.His new novel is: 我在神诡世界挂机成圣, roughly translated by google is "I Hang up and become Sanctified in the Mysterious". It's updated twice daily and at chapter 36 as of writing this. MC has 1 single training clone but it's a very different type than the first novel. It's set in a world where humanity has a fairly weak hold on their villages, and even a town of 3000 can just be wiped out in a night by monsters.
Honestly this is a pretty mediocre novel. Massive info dumps and no actual world or character building. Feels like a rough draft or outline rather than an actual story. Reading it makes one feel like the author is just winging it as he writes the novel and lacks any real sense of direction or plot.