This book just hits different and just is plain good. The writing quality is good and makes the story more interesting. The story development isn't like most stories on this site, which just barrel through everything but pays attention to detail and reminds me of some good Chinese cultivation novels. The characters in the novel have their own distinct personalities, and the MC does have character development even though it doesn't come across like that in the first chapters. The last and I think everything that makes the story more compiling is that the author took so much of his time to actual create everything needed to make his world better with cultivation realms, worlds and everything that makes me think other authors can also take lessons from him on how to make a story more detailed(Not badmouthing anyone), anyway thank you Author for creating such a masterpiece. Have a good one.
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:ok_hand:original :clap: idea :clap:Pretty unique twist on the cultivation-op-plis-nerf-hax genre-thingo. Enjoyable, good world building, erDunno, perhaps one of the edgier cultivation ones out there?Pretty good. Can't really ****post this.*tips fedora*
10/5 story so far i want more vengeance >:D more blood muahahahahahh140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140
Hi, and welcome to my novel :)I didn't intend to write a review before hitting chapter 1000, however I noticed many comments regarding a certain point. So, I got to edit the novel and write this review to notify you all about what changed :DThe age of the mc and other characters changed from being 8 into 11. I took into consideration all your comments and found them quite logical. I just ran a fast edit and check on all the +200 chapters of the novel, edited everything I could, and I plan to start a thorough edit later on this weekend.If you found anything that didn't add up, just write a comment and I'll edit that part ASAP.Thx for reading my novel, and thx for all the support and love you gave to it. I truly appreciate it.Have a nice reading and day everyone... See you later at 1k chapter review.P.S.: If you got any comment or opinion about my novel, just write it down. I take every single comment of yours seriously and may even change the setting of the entire novel based on your words :))
Love the writing skill behind this book. Fantastic world building and description of events! Not something I met everyday. Job well done, fellow author! I had a great time reading this. If you're thinking of reading it, go ahead. You will not regret it at all.
this story has nothing to do with his reading skills, learning capabilities or his smarts. it a wish fulfillment, slice of life, semi-smut like all others of it's kind.
Its quite qood minus the over explanation of things that we already know. Hope it gets picked?.
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A Disappointing Dive into Harem Fantasy with an Unlikable Protagonist and Incoherent NarrativeI typically avoid harem-style books, but I don't believe they're inherently without merit. If approached with a logical, even scientific perspective (e.g., strong animals often have multiple mates due to evolutionary pressures), it's possible to create an engaging alternate world where humans follow similar patterns. Unfortunately, this book fails to deliver a compelling narrative or a likable protagonist, and suffers from an incoherent plotline.The protagonist is transmigrated into a world where he has a unique system, locked until his 18th birthday. Despite the countdown indicating when it will be unsealed, he still expresses dissatisfaction with his current situation, unfairly blaming the system for his lack of strength and not having more wives. This is particularly off-putting considering his likely origin from a world similar to ours, where having multiple partners is not the norm. His dissatisfaction, when he already has at least two wives/concubines, is a clear sign of perverted greed.In this world, attaining a Buddha-like status is assumed to be rare. However, even if this were true, it doesn't justify the protagonist's selfishness and lack of appreciation for what he has. His inability to value his current relationships and his constant desire for more make him an unsympathetic character that readers will struggle to root for.The narrative also suffers from incoherence and inconsistency. The protagonist is supposedly a godly farmer, yet his farming skills are all battle-related. Instead of planting crops, he acquires plants that either grant him combat skills or function as weapons. The author provides him with a full set of armor and various weapons, which is nonsensical for a farmer character. Furthermore, the exaggerated names for his farming-based skills, such as Supreme Father, God of War, and Beast God, only add to the confusion and undermine the story's potential.In conclusion, this book disappoints on multiple fronts: an unlikable protagonist, narrative inconsistencies, and an incoherent plotline. The exploration of harem dynamics is far from engaging, and I cannot recommend this read. My rating is a disheartening 0/10. (The actual rating is better, because the Translation Quality doesn't suck)
Honestly I really liked this novel but the ending was just kind of... meh. The worldbuilding was great and had a lot of potential but the author didn't capitalize on that with the MC only studying all the time. Also there were many plotholes that were left unattended to like Betta's death, the aliens, the game world, etc. I would really like to get some closure on these topics but as with most novels, I probably won't get this.I thought that the dynamics of the characters were fun to read but the romance in the story was honestly not very great, especially with the harem at the end. I understand that the author had a hard time writing the novel at the end and that he was having problems writing the novel with his health problems. The first few chapters of the novel really got me hooked with how the spellcasting worked and all that. Also the system in this novel was well flushed out unlike other novels on this site and the skill naming was nice and descriptive without much superfluous talk. If I was asked if I would recommend this novel to other's, I would definitly say to give this a read because it is definitely one of the gems on this app/site. But I would also point out that one shouldn't expect to find a seemless ending. Thank you to the author for producing this great novel for us to read!