TLDR, This stories like a writing project a 7th grader would turn in and get a C for.Interesting at first, cliche after cliche, to instant power-up and time skip, to adventuring with no clear purpose but a slight hero complex, no clear understanding of how strong the MC is. Apparently he's a "Sage" but we never really get a clear understanding of the world's power scale and how strong a "sage" is supposed to be, from what I can see so far he seems like a 2nd rate magician with a few single and multi-target spells, nothing that can kill over 10 people really. He kills completely evil people like slavers who killed his father and (maybe r*ped his mother? author was never clear) also killed his mother, or a fat old noble lady who threw one of her slaves to be r*ped by 3 men then killed, then shoved a fire poker up the bum of the other cat girl. But then feels bad and like he wasn't supposed to do that. He gets on the wrong side of a receptionist because of his naiveness who starts discriminating and bullying him even sending him to a brothel and a recommendation to one of those male-like female cliche characters. He then stays there despite paying more or less the same as a normal inn despite knowing where some normal inns are (place he stayed at when he first came in the city). Theres alot more stupid stuff like this to read in this book but ill end it here otherwise this review wouldnt be readable. It's not bad to have a few cliches and unlikeable characters, you just have to balance it out with your own original ideas and interesting plot points. For example, it doesn't make sense for the receptionist to be mad at the MC for so long, or the MC to just sit there and take her abuse without easily clearing things up, or to be staying in the brothel like hotel for so long when there are clearly other options for the same price. You could have at least gave a destination for the MC other than "wandering around relying on plot armor for lucky encounters". For example, finding some lost relic of the succubus race that his mother had, or seeking out his fathers sister in the capital to check up on her and write from there. These are some basic examples but a little can go a long way.
First time I'm reviewing a novel. All in all, I live this book. There's little grammar errors that doesn't take away from understanding what's happening. The concepts used so far are interesting.
I read till chapter 24 and found the plot presented at first interesting and promising, with the characters that appeared with good construction.The problem is when the story fell at the MC's hands and the 'oh-so' great intelligence started. Minor accidents really, stupidly revealing his identity (with the character not relating him to his race even after having just met one herself).Then, as if having to nerf the whatever system of the MC so that he doesn't self-destruct, the author started 'correcting' many things like elements and even the Spirit of the system...Sorry, but I will drop this as I'm already tired of forced development. thanks to the MC 'stupidity'.
It seems like a generic cultivation novel, where the MC is a trash who gets a cheat and beats all the people that looked down on him. i actually find these novels frustrating. Everyone is all arrogant, snobbish, and murderous in novels like these right? And everyone will bully the trash MC. This is what doesent make sense to me. Dont you usually ignore people not "on your level"? like how you walk past homeless people, you dont go out of your way to make life harder for them. Maybe you will give them a sympathetic glance, but thats usually it. Anyway, it annoys me.
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No return to monke. Ascend to crab. Carcinization is the only true path. Crab is love. Crab is life. ? ? ? ? ?
The start is pretty Good, The translation is actually decent and not a lot of mistakes are being Made. So let's just hope that the world and character building are good as well.keep up The Good work.
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It's such a beautiful story and i love how the author moves us with amazing words, and i am so excited about knowing this kind of stories, i have been looking for this kind of stories which is so adorable and amazing how the characters have an amazing development, so yes i love bl.. Thank you so much author
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I like this book.Hopefully you take this out from trial read and make this novel to be translated for us people who likes light novels.Keep up the good work!!!
I really like the story. It also has lots of potential and is very interesting. Just need it to update more. I need more chapters. Gj author a very interesting plot