"Well, I am pleased you have done so," Gargos growled. "However, do you not find it quite rude to suddenly enter your chieftain's abode, without even asking permission?"
Shameless 5 star rating because I am very confident in the quality of my writing. This work is my entry for Qidian's story contest about Evolved Beasts. I'll keep updating it on the side while I work on my novel, Lord of Time.
"Good idea little brother! Let us go and greet our new master! Old Granny would be pleased if we provide a welcome party."
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"Why mother I am already sixteen so what is the problem in me participating in this ceremony."
The pacing of the story is very fast. The awakening of powers and the journey of revenge unfold in quick succession. I must confess, I can't put it down. I'm eagerly anticipating whether the protagonist will be able to seek revenge on his former friend, especially since 2,000 years have passed. There's so much to look forward to, with mysteries laid out from the past, present, to the future. The timeline of events is gradually being revealed bit by bit. Can't you just update to the end? I'm really willing to pay for it.
I just don't get the hype. I don't have any issues with the grammar or the world setting as such. My issues start with the lack of creativity. The mc just goes around killing and collecting skills without using them properly or thinking of how he can utilise them better. It's just more and more skills. Second issue is with how he wants to solo but somehow he always ends up with someone else or a group and his secrets are laid bare and he ends up telling people about it. This happens despite the fact he knows his skills are broken.Thirdly it's just a bunch of levels. I don't really see much of a story here at all. The guy just keeps going to Dungeons and easily gets levels.I mean what's the point??? This novel has such nice covers but the story has been a real let down till now.
Really enjoyable novel! Arcs weren’t to long or over complicated and romance was just right as well :)
I will be completely honest, I have not read this novel at all yet.It has been sitting in my reserve list for novels I have on backlog… that being said, every time I scroll through that list to look for something new to start reading and I glance at this novel as it goes by, all I see is:“The Rise of Back Pain”At this point I am not sure I want to start reading it because at this point it has been immotalized as a book about about a man and his increasingly painful back pain problem.I will get to it eventually, but I will never forget you Back Pain and your rise to prominence?
It is really good. I like the story and were it is heading. I can’t wait for the author to make a new chapter. I just started reading this today and I am already loving this book.
In my opinion, only problem in your novel is that it is very slow . if you solve this problem, then this story has very high potential . You should also focus more on Worldbuilding too .
This book is amazing, keep going!Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?