I love baseball stories. This is one of my favorites. Usually would leave longer and more detailed review but I don’t want to spoil anything. Just read it and that’s telling enough. 10/10. Also author give me more chapters.
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the whole thing is s*** it's nothing but another author with a God complex every other sentence is death God this and death God that when his original name is reaper to start with then moves to death then it goes to death God and then he just spams it out with everything don't waste your time with this novel
It's nice to see a star wars adaptation like this, the character has real personality and actually has to take his time and learn the force. It's also nice to see the star wars side of it based in a very interesting and underused era of star wars. My only small negative from this story is the slight rushness going between some chapters and can be a little confusing at times, but I can understand the author not wanting to get bogged down in the tiny details. All in all I love where the story has taken us so far and I can't wait to read more, thanks author
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Mind you, I’ve only read like the first 16 chapters but I have yet to see or read anything that would or could show me that lu Lu or whatever the MCs name as a great thieve as what the title had us believing . The Mc is just bad written there is no way about it , later on in the story it might get better I don’t know but what I know is that an Ameture author should never write about rebirth cuz that means that our dear Mc needs to be stronger, smarter and way more maturer than anybody else around him , and those aren’t things you can expect from an author writing their first novel .I mean this novel is screaming at you the ameturness of the Mc , like it his first time playing the game , yea yea I know he had I different class at the time but that doenst mean he need to act like a moron or a twelve years old who just got into the game , don’t even get me started on that whole contract thing I get that the author wanted to write a strifft and all, but did it have to be so stupid and leaving the contract blank not telling us any thing about it is shouts crazy to me , plus what kind of moron accepts a contract that unfair .There is a lot more , waaaaay more but billige it or not I don’t won’t to get into the details .
Great story, thanks for all your hard work! The last time I enjoyed a story this much, was a few years ago. When "Mother of Learning" was being written.
Nicely written. Interesting to read. Even though there are some hard to digest story turns, generally it is great. Hopefully it will get even Better in the future.
Amazing book, nice grammer and everything is just incredible!!Keep up the good work m8!!!...............................................
Easily one of the better cultivation novels on here. An interesting thing about the novel is that it tries to break some of the tropes and conventions that are standard in this genre by literally having the MC travel to a different country to avoid cliche arrogant young masters. Even moreso, when the MC eventually encounters a traditional cultivation sect he remarks at how backwards and inefficient it is. Its a bit refreshing to see a story try something new. After a while though the tone changes drastically and while it isn't a bad change, it's actually quite suited to the setting, it does lack a bit of the oomph of the first arc.That being said, the characters are done badly. For all the research on the U.S. culture/political system that the author actually seems to be mostly accurate in, the behavior and lexicon of the American characters is really...Chinese. Other characters are one dimensional and there are also the standard characters who might be interesting for a few chapters only to be forgotten about quickly.Overall, it's definitely worth a read for daring to break convention though it's not the end all be all of cultivation novels.
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My review of the novel (so that QI can't censor this review for "no review content"). This novel is one of my favorite novels, great MC, great story, great humor.***TRANSLATION STOLEN FROM WUXIAWORLD. DON'T READ HERE. GO TO WUXIAWORLD***Everytime Qidian tries to censor me, I'm just gonna come back stronger, so fu qidian for trying to censor the truth. I'm pissed that QI would dare dirty this novel with their pathetic schemes and disgusting moves. They stole the translations from WW (as is plenty obvious now lol). I'm insulted and incensed that they would think us readers were stupid enough to believe them saying that they reached an agreement with wuxiaworld. I hope us readers can band together against this bs QI.Keep censoring me QI, I'll be back stronger t(-.-)