Ignoring grammar errors It was great the first few chapters but once the author decided to add more fantasy elements it quickly fell apart. The fantasy elements are the divine mythic Fantasy stuff and divine powers. Maybe some people are fine with it but I genuinely thought it was an ordinary guy who time traveled back in to Ancient Rome with nothing more than modern knowledge to help him, but fortunately it turned out the MC has brainwashing powers and starts introducing radically wild ideas like normal like: oh yes there’s this virus things responsible for sickness so put alcohol to disinfect.... so onCan’t he just say : “ here’s a bottle of holy water rub it on wounds to receive the gods blessings to heal your wounds or something”Can the MC be more subtle when introducing new stuff.There’s also the music stuff as I’m quite dubious about ancient Roman’s musical taste with modern music.There are other dubious parts and larger elephants in the room which I won’t state as I’m people can read the comments section.
Wish Webnovel would let fans translate this already.Such a great novel, and I may never be able to read what happens unless I go look at MTL (which for this kind of novel, is nearly impossible to read and understand)..I just don't understand, y'all refuse to let fans translate it, even for free, but also refuse to continue translating it...
thanks for commenting, what I have to say is that this story is my first novel, so I have no experience in developing chapters, I always thought of releasing a novel, but when I developed the chapters it was difficult to reach more than 1,500 words that is normal and I was discouraged and gave up, so a teacher of mine told me to write short and see if people read that would encourage me, I did this and seeing the staff commenting makes me happy, I ask you to have patience I will improve with practice.my weakness is the dialogue between the characters, so pay more attention to the story itself and to the development of mc that is my forte.Comment more, but avoid giving only 1 star in the review
Interesting read
after 1880 chapters ent it already
Perfect for us, wholesome.
This book is a Best seller! No surprise there though as all Author Muse's books hold you spell bound from Start to Finish especially the Alpha series as well as Alpha Legacies series...
i rate this book for 5 star..
Fantastic read. Fast paced, full of humor and very Hot! Can't finish these chapters fast enough and looking forward to all the other sequels of the six pack! ...
love love love this story....
cant to read more of this book
Good book very interesting