She approached them and as she saw Gev's serious face, it is definitely about Lei. Her 6th sense doesn't betray her after all.
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I am extremely sorry I have not read more than 2chapters and I am writing this review for the event. so plz don't overthink it.
This isn't my usual genre of choice, but I found myself captivated from the first chapter. Seriously, the author does a wonderful job pulling you into the world, yet keeps enough mystery to always want more.I'll be keeping an eye on this one! Keep it up!!
Great story love it, need to improve the detail explanations but great till this point. The story keeps on improving at every chapters, update more frequently. Good luck and keep up the great job
this is interesting...i’ve already done with the 6 chapters and im kinda into it, the way you personas and character interacts and all its worth the read :) but for the action part you can improve it, and i know you can do it :)
Hello. First of all, this story is not written by you. It is a popular story form India, written by Chetan Bhagat. If you want to spread the story, you should first get permission from the author & 2nd you should mention the name & give credits to the author. If you want to write a Fan-fiction, it's wrong pattern as well, as you just copying & pasting the original work. I implore you to either mention & give credit to the original author, or remove what you have uploaded here. It is a punishable offense & you could get sued by the author. Regards.
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I like how the premise of this story somehow reflects our current society. You know, the rich be having a good life while the poor suffer.Anyway, I'm a fan of vampire stories and have read quite a lot. I can safely say that this story has potential. I especially like how you didn't go into the normal vampire trope but used something different like a genetic vampire. The term "GenAlucard" is a bit long tho in my opinion and can be difficult to remember for some people BUT it's still unique so I like it nonetheless ? Writing quality is good and comprehensible.I added this story to my collections so I'd be notified if there are updates. I'm looking forward to how this story goes! ❤️
I'm still not reading this but I will either way review this book for now. I will change this review later and will have an appropriate comment on this book.
I know the author on a personal level. So I might be a little biased. But honestly, this is a good story.I think the details could be improved and perhaps that would make this a gem. But id still read this. not because the author is holding a gun to my head( I assure you, he isn't) but because I like this story