Love this story It has the dark hero .The world building is great and has great character dynamic
I haven't written many reviews on this site so maybe my words aren't very credible, however i must say that this story is bad, perhaps the idea of the story itself is good, but the way the author writes is simply subpar at best, it reminds me of an essay one could read from a second grader. if it could be rewritten by someone else then perhaps I could give this a much higher rating but 2/5 is already the highest I can give this.
I'm really impressed by the setting of this book. First of all, I would like to give you a round over plus as the author of this book. Bravo for a job well done !. This is the first time that I would ever read a story with keen interest. ????. I am definitely adding it to my library.
The side characters are probably the worst part of this novel and the clichés you see everywhere make it worse. I mean you can use clichés but make it good. MC is alright, nothing interesting. The premise of the story is actually very interesting but it is executed in a boring way.
So far it looks absolutely amazing! From the three chapters that I've read so far, it sounds like it'll be really fun. The fact that the MC is such a fanboy is great, and portrayed in a way that I haven't seen before, which makes it pretty interesting and original. I can't wait to see how it goes!
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This story have a great potential. hehe, just me imagine that if I'm about to die in 3 months, what would I do?Though, I'm lucky I have my family if that ever happen lol.So yeah, the story is great, the chappy is short though. and maybe add more details that's all! Happy writing author and Goodluck!
I lovee how the story is developing, keep up the good work.The character Khael sure is a mystery on it's own and Elvery has to work on her detective skills.
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A good Reverend Insanity fan fiction. The fact that the was MC a avid fan of RI before his transmigration, helps him navigate the complex system of the world. Also he has a nice grip on his situation, as well a solid idea about not getting into a sudden frontal battle with Fang Yuan. The author is doing a good job, in leading the story forward in a interesting direction. The story is slow but I like them slow so I'm happy. If you like op MC with super system or golden finger given to them. You might be disappointed with this one, but if you like slow grinding intelligent MC. Then you should find a nice story with the novel.
5 star because of the Awesome Cover! Never seen something like that before! 5 star because of the Awesome Cover! Never seen something like that before! 5 star because of the Awesome Cover! Never seen something like that before! 5 star because of the Awesome Cover! Never seen something like that before! 5 star because of the Awesome Cover! Never seen something like that before!