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Wait, I forgot to do the review for reading all the chapters hahaha, let me tell you, it hooks me up since the first chapter! Sometimes I even forgot to leave a chapter or paragraph comments, I can even read it again and leave it, just in case... I'll continue reading, I like the steady space that you give to your writing, and the development is great! Keep going my dear Author! I'll cheer you up!
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Well, I like how it started. If the author will continue to update this novel, I'll read all the chapters and even give some power stones. Thank you for such a nice video game novel. Good luck
Your story Backgound is interesting but it was not really writen much after the intro and i fand this the best part of your story.Writing quality is bad, you can read the story but to many gramar fault but the greteatst BS is your characters in the story. To many bad cliches. lack of consistency and logic, when i have read the story i was thinking are all persons in the game idiots or 5 year old children?
I love this novel from high iq character to not useless teammates ,sometimes you think that you can predict the story and then boom you hit us with a new event that seems absurd and i love it love everything about it the only thing that I would say is that its hard for people like me who can't afford to buy and support you even though i wan to and so I have to always miss the update and not read the new chapters until i can unlock it but keep the work author and ty for this masterpiece
a story of a guy that let people step on him like nothing, ignorant and stupid, another classic chinese novel where the mc is a chinese that talk like some kind of chosen one and the author write something like "Song Shi did not deliberately let go of his Defense to be killed by the spatial storm. The main reason was that he was getting less and less interested in such things. Instead, he wanted to be a normal person who cultivated normally." a mc stupid enough that think whit a dic* and not head and enemys are stupid and are there only for the shine of the mc i feel like puking... super averenge novel VERY VERY VERY like a hair breath to drop to trash of trash of a novel the author like to say something like divine or dragon or immortal like some rock on the ground EVERY TECHNIQUE IN THE NOVEL 78% OF THEM HAVE NAME LIKE SUPREME,DIVINE, ALWAYS! in this novel even a beggar will say "I CULTIVATE A DIVINE TECHNIQUE!" R.I.P i hope u will not have a head ache when reading bye
I tried reading it I couldn't get into it also many other people make valid points cause why would the mc be that dumb
Main character is the epitome of reused reincarnation plot. Reveals so many of his cards early on when he has no power and no cultivation. Attracts people who want his knowledge. Probably will fight against them. Repeat.Also introduces him as some almighty expert that “accidentally died” without any explanation.... no enemy? Just oops... I tripped over a rock and died as one of the top 10 cultivators.
Xianxia in modern world, to sum things up;Perceived as trash earlier ? ??Fortuitous encounter? ??????Underestimated by stronger enemies? ??????Harem???Trolling MC? ??????????Pets? ??????????Drama???????Cultivating chapters?????Fatty? ??????????Cliffhanging by author?????
Fuck this work. I mean srsly. There are so many similar novels why does this have to be chosen over something that is moderately better like The Mighty Dragons Are Dead. That had a new and Innovative plotline.
Sigh, I want to read this story but the interaction between characters seems rather weird to me, and the story is lacking action(kinda feel like a slice of life to me).
Don't pick this up. This great book has been ruined by a crappy translator. It's not worth the distress. The translator disappears for weeks at a time, never communicates with the fan base, and just recently skipped 5 chapters. I've held on for a long time, hoping the translator will get better, but I'm finally dropping it for good.
