Oh, how i wish to experience more of this challenge for chaos or order. Like the thoughts of a star, this book sits on the fence, contemplating to shine or go supernova.I love it. Also, not sure if anyone cares but I love the Red king more than Scarlet king. I love chaos, so with a thumbs up and a cheer, I say ;" Let there be Eternal Chapters . this story must not end!"
I have only just started reading this novel so I can’t comment on much, but I have noticed something I think the author should know. The writing in chapter 8 is pretty awkward. I could tell something was off in the previous chapters but I wasn’t able to pin point it until now. I finally realized the problem while reading the fight scenes of chapter 8. The tense frequently switches from past tense to present tense. One of the main rules in writing is to choose a tense and stick with it. Otherwise it makes the pacing of each scene feel all messed up and off. Going back and editing all of the chapters with conflicting tenses and converting them all into past tense would make the story flow a lot smoother and improve the general quality of the writing. I recommend past tense because it is the one more suited to this kind of story. If you would like specific examples of where I think these problems are and could be improved. I would be happy to help.
The story setting and characters are interesting and new.The authors writing style is really refreshing. Really enjoying joying the story.Keep it up.
I have nothing to say ... More update more chapter plss dont drop this .. Actually good novel this . :).
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Author nice novel but if you don't fucking update this novel if I catch you I will be the crap at of you I have been waiting since give month for the update so you think is fair
author why she you saying it is an original if it has demon slayer in it??it can't be an original if you get worlds or characters from somewhere(anime,movies and so on)