Host : Lin feng
-10 HP
it was like that… invisible dragon was invisible so shang-a couldnt see him ;;-;;
"fuck..! invisible dragon already destroyed over 600 universes…
As a fan of the Author thanks to their other work Adopted soldier, I'm excited to read this~ Woooh support! I am a Fish btw. XD How many more charactere....
The mc is pathetic has no self respect kneels and knowtows to others easily even having no fault .Author i dare you to delete this review
If you want to read a novel that has a nice construction around rebirth and back-in-time, then you should give it a shot. The author has created a solid way to show us the plot and the concept. I'm following it :)To improve:Writing Quality: It has still some minor issues with the grammatic and punctuations, but nothing that a good rewrite don't fix. All in all, keep up the good work!
Fun fact!It's believed woodchopping began with a wager in Tasmania on who could fell a tree the fastest in the 1870s. The first chopping match was allegedly held in a forest, where it's said it took contestants 44 minutes to chop down a tree.
Dear author, I just wanted to say how much I've enjoyed reading your web novel so far. Your world-building is absolutely fantastic,I can't wait to see where the story goes from here! Thank you for sharing your talent with us, and please keep up the great work.
It was quite interesting till now i will continue reading i hope the author will keep up the good work
MC xcter does NOT match his experiences.He lives in a world where women rule. At least, the highest levels of power.Just a few chapters into the novel, it becomes clear that witches used their monopoly over magic to force the world I to submission.He KNOWS that Magi are automatically executed.He WANTS to learn all about his inheritance....And when he is captured he goes with the flow? No terror at his obvious fate? Then he is made or can be made into a battery.Where is the rage? The anger and helplessness at his fate? Your entire race has been wiped out but you barely even care?Someone here just said he doesn't know the Magi so there's no reason to be upset over their fate.Ok...But you are the same race. Right in the enemy camp. A slave already.The truth is that the author is only interested in developing the romance element to the detriment of all others.Allowed.But everything else must match the world and make sense.
Very good story! it hooked me to the first chapter, the story stelling is good, world building is also good, I recommend reading this if you're bored