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Empty shell of a novel, no real medical knowledge, no real plot, no good pen skill. Well, go read Great doctor Ling Ran and not this crap. .........
Author has a good grasp of storytelling and it was enjoyable to read through. There were hardly any grammatical errors, and if there were, they did not deter readers from the experience. This is an interesting story with a breath of fresh air. I also immensely enjoyed the author's way of captivating the readers with rich imagery and painting the world in our minds. But most of all. The banter. Oh my god, the banter is probably my favourite part. Some writers can write natural dialogue and some struggle with it - but this author is great at writing dialogue.
Great book.
it all started pretty well, but then the author began to build a plot in the style of "what is my mighty China." I won’t be surprised if the author of this book blowjob on himself. I do not recommend this book for reading.
Well-written novel. A welcome change from the 'average' xianxia novel. Has all the pro's of Japanese novels with none of the cons (strange MC thought process with crazy harem). MC's character is deep and realistic, and the other characters aren't 1-D characters either. Even if you aren't into romance, I recommend giving the novel a spin, as there is a 'cultivation' aspect in this world, and there is more action in the later chapters!
This MC is complete garbage. Lol He basically makes everyone become his slave before he helps them. HjhhbbbnnnjjjjjjjjjjHjhhbbbnnnjjjjjjjjjj
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It's depressing about how it down spiraled from something that caught my interest to become something I regret even started reading about. The first 40 chapters were good and I actually kind of loved it. I wished for more but I would say I'm pretty disgusted at this point...Mountains upon mountains of redundant paragraphs. Copies of chapters everywhere almost as if to steal the fast passes and coins. The entire story is so broken that it's impossible to read. I'm kind of impressed how something that was going well could be made to become something so terrible like this...I regret trying to read this and to others who are going to read this, unless the author is going to edit his released chapters, don't even try to read these broken paragraphs of words. It is not apparent at the beginning but recent chapters are extremely bad to even read
For now it's good. Because it's not some 18+ fap material with a storyline as a background. I like that MC is not just running around and raping everyone. He is restricting himself. Writing style is good, it's easy to read. There are no info dumps. Idk about future chapters, so it's 5 stars for 30 chapters. Just don't copy chinese novels a lot, they have their own problems. And 1 chapter per day is enough. Quality over quantity. But try to make a stable schedule.
Currently all I need in a book, I think I am Inlove
These 2 are hot ! So glad they belong to each other ! Now let see what jackson ing to say ? Great work author ! Really enjoy it
Tooooooo loooooong. I got tired n gave up reading even if it was interesting. hmmm
