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It's been a year since the last update. what happened man?
I dig this novel. It is easy to read, but with depth, and the characters are lifelike and the MC is very sympathetic, and you really get the sense that the author cares for this book. The events make sense, and still there is always something that leaves you wanting to read more. The core concept in the synopsis should, hm, also make you interested in the book. And I love the action scenes as well! Would recommend this to other readers as well. Thank you, author.
If the author of this novel was 12 years or younger: Great concept! You are an intelligent young author with good ideas. Please develop your writing and let us enjoi your works in the future.If the author is older... at least 16 or more.... ARG!!!Usually I like this kind of story - Beast-Taming, getting Stronger, a system for adds. However, in this story it is presented so plainly and... arg!-First of all, the language, even if machine-translated, is kindergarden-level.-Szene-Descriptions are awfull in their composition, especially the fights.- I am only at chapter 14 or so, but the plot is jumping and jumping ahead, with sequenses and szenes other novels would make 3-12 chapters for AT LEAST, which here are implemented, rushed down and... not usefull at all.- Power-jumping is the next thing. Just a few sentences ago something was explained to only work at higher level, MC does it earlier... with no explenation for HOW! It was just neccessary - NOT!- Dumb characters, which are so 2D, that I fear they could degrade to 1D with a little less care...- The resoning of the MC and the characters is another thing and... "Ah, he is doing somthing dangerours... but he is MC... he says he wants to do it... how could I forbid it, even thought I am responssible for his safety?" WHAT KIND OF LOGIC LEVEL IS THAT????ARg! I m frustrated, because the idea behind the story seemed good and interesting, but - I am not sure if that is TOO hard - the author makes nearly EVERY mistake an author can make in the development at the beginning AND seems not to care about his own naming of techniques, at all..Sorry, I am frustrated....
Basically digging novel and post apocalyptic bunker novel mixed into one with beast taming thrown in. Cheat is almost basically the same thing
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Other than updating regularly it has no other redeeming quality.The translation is something out of Google translate, barely readable. It is obvious the translation was literally copy pasted into a translation website and the translator was to lazy to clean it up and make it readable. He/she has no idea how to speak the English language and it shows.There's better pet training stories out there that actually have a translator that knows what they're doing.
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Finally it's been translated, I really love this movie but I was forced to read Machine translations, I could still understand the plot and story but it still cause me some headaches after lol.
Everything here feels so contrived. Unlimited pet summoning? He only has three pets. And he only uses one, in order not to stand out. His pets are legendary+ grade, but have weak skills and every serious fight they get in is pointlessly long and drawn out. "OP MC" would be false advertising.
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a rare good novel..... but I am worried about its future.... he is already very rich ... how will the plot develop.... looking forward to it
