The Main Character is a coward. That would have been fine, but he whines so much about his ‘bad’ luck and l doesn’t even use his brain to turn desperate situations around. He needs some deus ex machina bullshit just to survive because he’s so pathetic.MC is also a spineless pushover.A loli will also come to be his companion for a very arbitrary version, and if you like violent and unreasonable ‘tsunderes’, then you’ll like her.His power is fine. He just whines about it’s source and doesn’t think about what he can do with it.Think about it for a sec. If you are going to die and your only way to live is to do cutesy, girlish poses, would you do it?If no, then the MC with his overly high masculine pride may be relatable to you.
Nice Story, character, updating and world Background -?????Hoping you continue the good work!???????????????????????
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Well, my review is kind of biased. This guy is a friend of mine so don't take my word when I saw thqt the story is good and it's worth a try. Try on your own and if you like it write a review and if you don't like it then also write a review about the things you are not satisfied with. It's helpful to the writer.
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Hey. Looks like someone stole and published your story on Amazon. https://***.amazon.com/Survivors-Path-Braxus-ebook/dp/B08L2F3XZ5/As the author and original rights holder, you can get the novel taken down if you submit a copyright violation claim at the bottom of the novel page. Best of luck, ramon
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