"You gave us cookies. How can we help?"
"What is it?" Arya asked curiously.
I laughed. "Indeed. It is the creators' choice to play a game. But yes, if you were to one day end, it would be best to be satisfied at that point. I think the creators' idea is magnificent, and I would love if you were to continue doing so. So please, turn me into another 'human' and let me play out your game. Though, before that, it's fine if I meet up with Selina for a bit, right?"
It took Roland a good minute to realize that he had been knocked down.
"Yes, yes, yes!!" i cried out loudly
The Smiling Demon shifted awkwardly on her feet, and tried to fill the silence with her nervous chatter, "Since it's your first time and all, you probably don't know how the clean up works. Usually when a fight ends, if someone isn't dead, then they just get hooked up to a machine and sent on their merry way in a few minutes- but when we do die, the Club has several rooms like this where our minds recover and we come back to life. Kind of like a sci-fi version of Frankenstein I guess…"
Wonderful! It's nicely paced, the writing flows well. I love how the first three chapters conveyed this sense of motherly love for Malaki from his mother. It was absolutely well written. So immersive that you can feel a bit of sympathy for a fictional character. Lovely!
Okay book. What I like: Writing quality is good. The quality is consistent and I'm enjoying it. But, it could add with some more description. Story development is good. It's pretty interesting. I like how the system doesn't give him everything (read to find out) and how it's not completely cliche as the Mc was the 4th strongest of the world. But it could get rid of some of the cliche elements like: Archehon causes trouble, Archehon wins, Archehon goes back to do something else. But seeing how the author is a newbie, I'll look over it. Character design is okay. Could definitely improve a lot on describing them since it's hard to know how they look like exactly. Updating stability is something idk. since I started reading this after the break. (I hope the author comes back from the break since I'm enjoying the book). World background is amazing. I like some of the unique ideas and names the author comes up for the abilities and heroes. This is by far, my favourite element. Overall, decent book. Before I rate it again, I need to get more chapters. :D
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Apparently, reviewing one's work is a shameless tradition of Webnovel, and I shall follow through with it ?Jokes aside, I'm not fit to judge my own work, because for me, it's something I worked hard on and of course, I will find it interesting. So I will leave away any judgment. It's up to you to tell me what you think of it :DDon't, however, be fooled by the low number of reviews and collections, it's only because I couldn't update daily during the promotion period for new books, which lowered the exposure.Worry not, though, for I've got a good number of chapters stacked, so, the daily update is on!!Please enjoy it ?
it's very good bro the whole work, i hope you continue with the work until the end because i really like reading this novel and getting tired of seeing many promising works being Abandoned by their authors, more strength there to continue their work until the End
This book is a hidden gem and I'm glad I've found one! As a fan of Lord of the Mysteries I'm extremely happy that I've found another book set in a victorian era. Also it's very refreshing to see someone go away from cliché system-harem plot (it's very refreshing to NOT see them in the book, especially as a dedicated webnovel reader who started reading before the whole system shtic appeared). The writing is very well paced and structured, characters are interesting to read about and the comedy is great! What else do you need from books?)) I definitely recommend to read this one and get it to the top ?